Bottled Up
Scene from a Diner9 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I remember the looks. I breastfed my second child for seven months. He has always been extremely healthy. I found ways to not draw attention to myself,
If I wasn't eating, I guarantee my husband wouldn't be. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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I remember the looks. I breastfed my second child for seven months. He has always been extremely healthy. I found ways to not draw attention to myself,
If I wasn't eating, I guarantee my husband wouldn't be. :-) Karen
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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lol. glad you reviewed and enjoyed it, I am working on something, I'll promote it so you can earn a few points.
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I'd read it with no points. I read one for one. Sure points are nice, but friends are better.
:-)
Comment from EeanBlack
lol. Feeding a baby in public probably wasn't a problem for the Neanderthals. I sometimes wish we weren't so advanced, so cultured. People are so afraid just to live. Was she hypersensitive or just trying to embarrass the guy? I can actually see the look on his face.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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lol. Feeding a baby in public probably wasn't a problem for the Neanderthals. I sometimes wish we weren't so advanced, so cultured. People are so afraid just to live. Was she hypersensitive or just trying to embarrass the guy? I can actually see the look on his face.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Ty for your lovely review
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I hope I didn?t sound insensitive myself, I just remember how strange it was for me when my sister breast fed her baby in public.
Comment from jessizero
I loved the title you selected for this short piece of fiction! This was a fun and entertaining story, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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I loved the title you selected for this short piece of fiction! This was a fun and entertaining story, and I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read it.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
To begin with his strange behavior trying to hide her drew attentions to them I'm sure. I'm probably people were hearing them kissing to each other back and forth. You made it seem like she was just being a bit promiscuous. That's good because that's the way some people feel or think about breastfeeding. Of course most of all of them were breastfed in secret. A good topic.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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To begin with his strange behavior trying to hide her drew attentions to them I'm sure. I'm probably people were hearing them kissing to each other back and forth. You made it seem like she was just being a bit promiscuous. That's good because that's the way some people feel or think about breastfeeding. Of course most of all of them were breastfed in secret. A good topic.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
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***Sigh***
Comment from Spitfire
I chuckled at the last line and wish you well in the contest. Great title. One nit: "I'm am not.
should be 'I am not.' Good use of active verbs as in 'clicked her tongue' and 'whipped the napkin off.'
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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I chuckled at the last line and wish you well in the contest. Great title. One nit: "I'm am not.
should be 'I am not.' Good use of active verbs as in 'clicked her tongue' and 'whipped the napkin off.'
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm trying to get back into the swing of writing daily.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your story. It is interesting and impressive. A very good flash fiction post. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck on the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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I have enjoyed reading your story. It is interesting and impressive. A very good flash fiction post. Excellent work! No mistakes found. I like it. Good luck on the contest!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the review and kind words.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction contest. The story hooked me right away, kept my interest and had me cheering at the ending. Nicely done all in 100 words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 100 Word Flash Fiction contest. The story hooked me right away, kept my interest and had me cheering at the ending. Nicely done all in 100 words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the kind words.
Comment from C.M. Brown
I love it! So much in one quick story. Hence flash fiction, right! I kept thinking there was another reason why her breast was showing but the end really surprised me and totally reminded me of how I felt being with my friends that are nursing. Great job!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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I love it! So much in one quick story. Hence flash fiction, right! I kept thinking there was another reason why her breast was showing but the end really surprised me and totally reminded me of how I felt being with my friends that are nursing. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the 6 stars and the kind words, Many blessings.
Comment from RodG
Today breast-feeding in public would probably go unnoticed in many restaurants.
I like how you characterize the husband (conservative and self-conscious for her) and wife (a bit of a rebel) through dialog and their actions.
Rod
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Today breast-feeding in public would probably go unnoticed in many restaurants.
I like how you characterize the husband (conservative and self-conscious for her) and wife (a bit of a rebel) through dialog and their actions.
Rod
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
