2024 Japanese Poetry
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9 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has high sensory appeal. A mom makes everything better and wipes more than tears away. Of special note:
don't worry about a thing
you won't face the world alone -
(When a person has a mother, they will never be alone, and they will never have to face anything alone.)
Well-chosen photo. Beautiful presentation. Xo. M
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has high sensory appeal. A mom makes everything better and wipes more than tears away. Of special note:
don't worry about a thing
you won't face the world alone -
(When a person has a mother, they will never be alone, and they will never have to face anything alone.)
Well-chosen photo. Beautiful presentation. Xo. M
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I read in a parents magazine or somewhere about magic "keep away the monsters spray". You take an empty spray bottle fill it 5/ 6 with water add a few drops food coloring still you get it the color you want. Add a few drops pine oil, and there you have it ! spray under beds. inside closets, Etc. You can make them small bottles for them to spray ahead of themselves on the way to the bathroom! Karen
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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I read in a parents magazine or somewhere about magic "keep away the monsters spray". You take an empty spray bottle fill it 5/ 6 with water add a few drops food coloring still you get it the color you want. Add a few drops pine oil, and there you have it ! spray under beds. inside closets, Etc. You can make them small bottles for them to spray ahead of themselves on the way to the bathroom! Karen
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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thank you very much, Karen (*-*)
gypsy hugs
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Such a sweet poem. Written for the memory of your mother. I lost my dad a month after turning thirteen. Still makes me sad. I know he will forever be in my heart. Just as your mother will be in yours. Lovely poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Such a sweet poem. Written for the memory of your mother. I lost my dad a month after turning thirteen. Still makes me sad. I know he will forever be in my heart. Just as your mother will be in yours. Lovely poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and sharing your experience losing a parent. Yes, she is in my heart.
Gypsy
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy those childhood days when you felt so secure with your Mom (and Dad) looking out for you? Was a comforting time for sure. Sometimes being grown up isn't so good!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy those childhood days when you felt so secure with your Mom (and Dad) looking out for you? Was a comforting time for sure. Sometimes being grown up isn't so good!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
just don't do the bouncing right after a meal LOL!
very sweet gogyohka suite about a mom and her baby...
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing it
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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just don't do the bouncing right after a meal LOL!
very sweet gogyohka suite about a mom and her baby...
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing it
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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When my son was little I bounced him on my lap while playing cards with friends... it's a talent lol
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Your mother is with you always. I know she's in heaven looking down and smiling at the wonderful woman you've become. She also resides in your heart. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Your mother is with you always. I know she's in heaven looking down and smiling at the wonderful woman you've become. She also resides in your heart. Thank you for sharing this wonderful presentation with us.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
Such is the love of a mother. I think that mothers are naturally more nurturing than us fathers. I know in today's world that might not be the PC to say, but it is what I see all around me. The love is as intense, but expressed differently. Ha ha! When boys come calling on my teenage daughter, they are more skittish when I am around, than when it's with my wife. Yeah! I gladly put them through hell.... And hope that my son goes through the same.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Such is the love of a mother. I think that mothers are naturally more nurturing than us fathers. I know in today's world that might not be the PC to say, but it is what I see all around me. The love is as intense, but expressed differently. Ha ha! When boys come calling on my teenage daughter, they are more skittish when I am around, than when it's with my wife. Yeah! I gladly put them through hell.... And hope that my son goes through the same.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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You're very welcome.
Comment from kahpot
I will look under your bed
to keep the monsters away
These two lines say so much more about protecting our children, a beautiful read and poem, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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I will look under your bed
to keep the monsters away
These two lines say so much more about protecting our children, a beautiful read and poem, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You had a wonderful mother. I guess you won't know the "what-if". But then you were spared the teen years when moms and daughters are at odds. So you can remember only the most beautiful parts of mothering to share with your children and grandchildren. I liked the checking under the bed!
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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You had a wonderful mother. I guess you won't know the "what-if". But then you were spared the teen years when moms and daughters are at odds. So you can remember only the most beautiful parts of mothering to share with your children and grandchildren. I liked the checking under the bed!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. My mom was a kind and loving mom. I was very close to her, always following her around and sitting next to her. I was her little barnacle.
Love
Marival
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Lol. No, not a barnacle! A forget-me-not flower! Or something small and pretty.
