Beyond The Matrix
Uplifting very unique style poem.2 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
This is a post which confirms that your faith is strong. The black letters in the blue background is difficult to read My suggestion is that the background may be made light blue..
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a post which confirms that your faith is strong. The black letters in the blue background is difficult to read My suggestion is that the background may be made light blue..
Comment Written 23-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for reading. It took me a long time to get a reply of this poem, I didn't think anyone was gonna comment on it. Thank you.
Comment from Julie Helms
This is definitely unique combination of the Matrix with the truth of accepting Christ as savior. It's also a twist because Neo is supposed to be the savior in the movie and here he is bowing to the real savior!
A few suggestions for correction:
Twas Neo replied
(Either *Twas Neo who replied* or *Twas Neo's reply*)
spiritauly
(spiritually)
Julie
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is definitely unique combination of the Matrix with the truth of accepting Christ as savior. It's also a twist because Neo is supposed to be the savior in the movie and here he is bowing to the real savior!
A few suggestions for correction:
Twas Neo replied
(Either *Twas Neo who replied* or *Twas Neo's reply*)
spiritauly
(spiritually)
Julie
Comment Written 22-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your positive feedback, Julie. I was begining to think that nobody was gonna give me feedback on this poem. Thank you once more.
