Ringside Seat
You can't just be an observer8 total reviews
Comment from judiverse
There's still time! Please increase the size of the font. It's hardly readable against the dark background. You might lighten it. I don't fault your commentary. This election is going to be a circus, whether we like it or not. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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There's still time! Please increase the size of the font. It's hardly readable against the dark background. You might lighten it. I don't fault your commentary. This election is going to be a circus, whether we like it or not. Best of luck!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Julie Helms
Very true words. People need to get involved if they expect any change. I would recommend you enlarge your font. The small black is difficult to read against the dark blue.
Best of luck!
Julie
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Very true words. People need to get involved if they expect any change. I would recommend you enlarge your font. The small black is difficult to read against the dark blue.
Best of luck!
Julie
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Mark Jackson
I get it it is good, Bullshit but good. Democracy does not work never did and is only getting worse. Benevolent meritocracy is what we all need. Good in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I get it it is good, Bullshit but good. Democracy does not work never did and is only getting worse. Benevolent meritocracy is what we all need. Good in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt #3. This is very true, this year more than ever before, You can't sit on the sidelines and think your vote doesn't count because each and every vote could make the difference in how our country continues. If I were to make a suggestion i would say you should increase your font size because your poem is getting lost on the page and is very difficult to read. just something to consider. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Political 5-7-5 writing prompt #3. This is very true, this year more than ever before, You can't sit on the sidelines and think your vote doesn't count because each and every vote could make the difference in how our country continues. If I were to make a suggestion i would say you should increase your font size because your poem is getting lost on the page and is very difficult to read. just something to consider. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much. Good suggestion--I was so focused on everything else, I forgot to check font size.
Comment from jessizero
This is a great poem and a great response to "it's not my circus." You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing this political 5-7-5, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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This is a great poem and a great response to "it's not my circus." You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing this political 5-7-5, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
As citizens of any country, I believe it is our duty to take an interest in Politics. We need to understand the different parties, what they stand for and then make an informed choice. Women in particular fought for the vote and I never waste mine, I watch the circus and we have to be part of it, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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As citizens of any country, I believe it is our duty to take an interest in Politics. We need to understand the different parties, what they stand for and then make an informed choice. Women in particular fought for the vote and I never waste mine, I watch the circus and we have to be part of it, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Shirley Ann Bunyan
Haha, well said. Succinct and amusing. A great moving image to go with it too. It always amazes me how much can be said in so few words.
Well done, gansach.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Haha, well said. Succinct and amusing. A great moving image to go with it too. It always amazes me how much can be said in so few words.
Well done, gansach.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Ringside Seat, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that whoever is chosen to steer the clown car, may take us over the prat falls.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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This 5-7-5, Ringside Seat, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that whoever is chosen to steer the clown car, may take us over the prat falls.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much.
