Love is in the Air
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Heartbeats"Love poems and sweet nothings
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Comment from June Sargent
Being separated from a loved one is painful beyond words. With this cinquain you have captured that longing. The heart wants what it wants. Heartbeats instead of minutes.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Being separated from a loved one is painful beyond words. With this cinquain you have captured that longing. The heart wants what it wants. Heartbeats instead of minutes.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you, June.
Comment from lyenochka
What a perfect cinquain poem! And I like how you start with heartbeats as a measure of time and how memories incite even more longing. I appreciate the notes describing the form in more detail!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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What a perfect cinquain poem! And I like how you start with heartbeats as a measure of time and how memories incite even more longing. I appreciate the notes describing the form in more detail!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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I always appreciate your encouraging words. Thanks.
Comment from Sally Law
I enjoyed your heartfelt cinquain poem, my friend. A wonderful poetry form and addition to your book. Sending along my very best today as always.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed your heartfelt cinquain poem, my friend. A wonderful poetry form and addition to your book. Sending along my very best today as always.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Sally.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely, romance-filled poem . I love the idea presented here. Counting heartbeats to meaure the time away from a loved one. Now I have one question to pose to you and I am not certain myself. Is it Heartbearts IS or Heartbeats ARE? I am not a grammar expert so do with that what you will. Beatiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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A lovely, romance-filled poem . I love the idea presented here. Counting heartbeats to meaure the time away from a loved one. Now I have one question to pose to you and I am not certain myself. Is it Heartbearts IS or Heartbeats ARE? I am not a grammar expert so do with that what you will. Beatiful poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2024
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Oh, Marilyn, thanks so much for catching the grammatical area. I really appreciate you bringing it to my attention and shall correct immediately. Have a lovely day.
