Together Forever
Promises to never let go .....21 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
This story is short and sweet. You have a lovely way with words that I never get tired of reading. The artwork is perfect for the subject. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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This story is short and sweet. You have a lovely way with words that I never get tired of reading. The artwork is perfect for the subject. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hello, April...So glad to see you here this morning. I hope you are feeling better and I thank you for the kind words.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm feeling much better. I might even live now. Lol
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I certainly hope so! Have a great day!
Comment from jessizero
I loved this brief piece of flash fiction. It was sweet and romantic, and it had elements of fantasy. You used your words well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I loved this brief piece of flash fiction. It was sweet and romantic, and it had elements of fantasy. You used your words well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for your kind review and for taking the time to read.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
What a bittersweet poem! It gives a lot of impact and feeling in just a small amount of words. It has a nice flow, so I will say good luck in the "Flash Fiction" contest.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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What a bittersweet poem! It gives a lot of impact and feeling in just a small amount of words. It has a nice flow, so I will say good luck in the "Flash Fiction" contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thanks Jodi. Flash isn't my norm...I write mystery and crime, but I needed a short break.... coming up for air.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mark Jackson
Ooo that is romantic. I have just discovered flash fiction and have started to seek it out. It am really enjoying what I am finding. It i amazing what you have been able to do with just a few words. I feel like I have been on a roller-coaster! Thank you.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Ooo that is romantic. I have just discovered flash fiction and have started to seek it out. It am really enjoying what I am finding. It i amazing what you have been able to do with just a few words. I feel like I have been on a roller-coaster! Thank you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Flash can be fun and challenging. Hope you enjoy the adventure.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Carol,
A shooting at a wedding, how very tragic! I know stuff happens, maybe a disgruntled ex, maybe a drug issue, or just random act of violence, who knows? Tragedy is tragedy, though. Love the one night they had together in her dream.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Hi Carol,
A shooting at a wedding, how very tragic! I know stuff happens, maybe a disgruntled ex, maybe a drug issue, or just random act of violence, who knows? Tragedy is tragedy, though. Love the one night they had together in her dream.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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It happened in our town and I hate to think how times are changing. Once a peaceful town and now.... a man stabbed 11 people including the mailman and four died. An 18-year-old boy who was employed at Walmart was attacked by a man who grabbed a knife from a shelf and stabbed him in the back. It's frightening.
Smiles, Carol
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Oh my gosh!! That's horrible!! I'm so sorry it's become that way in your town!!
Comment from karenina
You rascal! I was thinking-- "Romance? This is MURDER!"
(LOL)
Then it dawned on me, this is you!
Of course everything will turn out peachy!
Great Flash!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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You rascal! I was thinking-- "Romance? This is MURDER!"
(LOL)
Then it dawned on me, this is you!
Of course everything will turn out peachy!
Great Flash!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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It's a bit screwy but it just came into my head in the early morning while I waited for the girls. The good, the bad, the memories. Sad part is there was a shooting at a wedding in my town.
Smiles, Carol
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A genuine shotgun wedding? Wow.
(Well, the world is spinning wonky these days!)
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, well, well author. This piece is enchantingly frightening. Like the original fairytales.
I wonder if anyone has ever been shot at the altar? Gosh, hope not.
D
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Well, well, well author. This piece is enchantingly frightening. Like the original fairytales.
I wonder if anyone has ever been shot at the altar? Gosh, hope not.
D
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I got the idea from a shooting that happened in my town not too long ago. Terrible and heartbreaking. Thanks for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Well, Carol,what a tragic out of what should have been the happiest day of their lives. Her only solace is her neverending love and memories. Good luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Well, Carol,what a tragic out of what should have been the happiest day of their lives. Her only solace is her neverending love and memories. Good luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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I based this on an incident that happened in my town. So cruel and unhappy for all. I can't imagine saying I do to a forever and having it ripped away.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is an excellent flash fiction story. It has a beginning, middle, and end. It is interesting, so to keep my attention. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Aside - I might have repeated the words "together forever" at the end. Why didn't you?
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent flash fiction story. It has a beginning, middle, and end. It is interesting, so to keep my attention. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Aside - I might have repeated the words "together forever" at the end. Why didn't you?
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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You were right...I guess I did not notice that I had changed it in one place....Now it says together forever...thanks. I appreciate your suggestion and the review.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is well written that you have written for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a wonderful day and a good and healthy weekend. Patricia .
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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This is well written that you have written for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest may you have a wonderful day and a good and healthy weekend. Patricia .
Comment Written 05-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2024
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Thanks Patricia for your kind words and the review. Have a great weekend. Smiles, Carol
