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Everyday Miracles

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We see miracles every day. They're all around uy'

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Comment from TPAC
Exceptional
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Very poetic. I found your statements, gripping to the heart, making me to ponder similar beliefs I have in my own life. I found everything truthful: and a super plus for deep meaning. All started in my given opinion.

 Comment Written 31-May-2024

Comment from M_Esther
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I like this poem very much! The descriptions of the colors and especially the first stanza, about all the greens, caught my eye. The meter is perfect throughout. I also appreciate your note at the end. I want to find that song by Rich Mullins now.

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
    It's one of my favorite Rich Mullins songs! He was such a gifted poet, singer, and loving follower of Christ! Here's the ink. I should have put it in my notes, too. I'll go do that. :)
    Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words.
    Blessings,
    Deb
    https://www.bing.com/videos/search?q=rich%20mullins%20the%20color%20green%20videos&FORM=VIRE0&mid=6AA42977DE647F90C5B36AA42977DE647F90C5B3&view=detail&ru=%2Fsearch%3Fq%3Drich%20mullins%20the%20color%20green
reply by M_Esther on 07-Apr-2024
    Thank you for the link, Deb. I will check it out!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a very joyful post, celebrating the beauty of God's creation, resplencent in its rainbow of colours. Your rhyming is assured and your poem flows with pleasing effect. In addition, your notes and stunning image complete the post. A great entry for the club! Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much, Debbie. I apreciate the read and the comments.
    Blessings,
    Deb
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, God's Planet, presented with four ABCB-rhymed quatrains, pulls out many colors to describe the glorious world that God tints with every day.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024
    Thanks so much, Bill. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
    Blessings,
    Deb