Wonders, Seen
Do, be keen.2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I think we all look forward to the emergence of greenery in "gentle" Spring. I do not understand your punctuation in this poem. Neither the commas nor the ellipses are needed.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I think we all look forward to the emergence of greenery in "gentle" Spring. I do not understand your punctuation in this poem. Neither the commas nor the ellipses are needed.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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I guess I am slower than most people. It takes time for me to be touched by the wonders of natures. Thank you for sharing your reactions with me.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the nature contest
the nice addition of the rhyme and good description
of the emergence of spring.
Winter's over at last, welcome beautiful spring.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem for the nature contest
the nice addition of the rhyme and good description
of the emergence of spring.
Winter's over at last, welcome beautiful spring.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Thank you for sharing Spring with me.
