Jesus is the Light
A 30 syllable poem.13 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
patcelaw, And this is a great display of awesome light...literally, the picture
is the big draw/attention getter forcing reader(s) to remember theme and
tone rendered via scribe's pious words of faith. teafor2
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
patcelaw, And this is a great display of awesome light...literally, the picture
is the big draw/attention getter forcing reader(s) to remember theme and
tone rendered via scribe's pious words of faith. teafor2
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for a very nice review. I appreciate it.
Comment from BethShelby
Your 30 syllable poem is so true and I think you live you faith and other to see the light of Jesus shining through. We should all express the desire to be a light to others.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
Your 30 syllable poem is so true and I think you live you faith and other to see the light of Jesus shining through. We should all express the desire to be a light to others.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it great
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is beautiful, it is simple but tells a story of hope and paints an image far beyond the words used. I particularly like the final line, light usually reflects of, but you chose shining through; to me this suggests that the light has be absorbed used some how and then shared. A lovely image and a though provoking poem.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
This is beautiful, it is simple but tells a story of hope and paints an image far beyond the words used. I particularly like the final line, light usually reflects of, but you chose shining through; to me this suggests that the light has be absorbed used some how and then shared. A lovely image and a though provoking poem.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the nice review and the five stars.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful and heartfelt prayer, spoken with love and sincerity. I like your emphasis on light throughout. Because He is the light He can shine through us. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
A beautiful and heartfelt prayer, spoken with love and sincerity. I like your emphasis on light throughout. Because He is the light He can shine through us. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it
Comment from Treischel
I love the effect of that ray of sunlight to enhance your message about Jesus Christ being the light of the world. It is nearly a prayer as you ask that light to shine through you. A message of faith,
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
I love the effect of that ray of sunlight to enhance your message about Jesus Christ being the light of the world. It is nearly a prayer as you ask that light to shine through you. A message of faith,
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. It is appreciated
Comment from lyenochka
That's a great prayer! May we be in the Light of Jesus, Who is the Light of the World. Yes, may we shine His Light around us. Thanks for sharing and Blessed Easter to you, Patricia!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
That's a great prayer! May we be in the Light of Jesus, Who is the Light of the World. Yes, may we shine His Light around us. Thanks for sharing and Blessed Easter to you, Patricia!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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With gratitude of my heart, I wish thank you for very very nice review
Comment from Brenda Strauser
What a nice poem. Jesus is what this words needs. He is surely the light too. I like your picture. It goes very good with the the words. Very good work
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
What a nice poem. Jesus is what this words needs. He is surely the light too. I like your picture. It goes very good with the the words. Very good work
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work I appreciate
Comment from fm wright
I like it that you left it a basic thirty syllable poem. The message and the photo work very well together. It could be a prayer of mine. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
I like it that you left it a basic thirty syllable poem. The message and the photo work very well together. It could be a prayer of mine. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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With gratitude to wish to thank you for very nice review.
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You are ever so welcome.
Comment from jim vecchio
That should be our desire all year long, but most especially as we near the day we celebrate Christ's Resurrection! Plain but meaningful words! Have a very Blessed Easter!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
That should be our desire all year long, but most especially as we near the day we celebrate Christ's Resurrection! Plain but meaningful words! Have a very Blessed Easter!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work. It?s much appreciated.
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Have a Blessed Easter! He arose!
Comment from royowen
I remember someone that the light we have is like the moon's light we reflect the one true source, the Son of God Himself. May every person be drawn to that light like a moth to a flame, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
I remember someone that the light we have is like the moon's light we reflect the one true source, the Son of God Himself. May every person be drawn to that light like a moth to a flame, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I am always grateful to get such nice reviews as this thank
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Most welcome