Don't Panic
Psalm 62:112 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your ability to write such inspiring words is always a pleasure to read. Here, in your free rhyming verse in an acrostic format, you urge the recipient to feel free of panic and be reassured that faith will always deliver from these fears. Upbeat in tone and compellingly readable, the only suggestion would be the line: The things that wrench at your heart (treat - without the 's' )
Well done! You have a very soulful disposition. Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Your ability to write such inspiring words is always a pleasure to read. Here, in your free rhyming verse in an acrostic format, you urge the recipient to feel free of panic and be reassured that faith will always deliver from these fears. Upbeat in tone and compellingly readable, the only suggestion would be the line: The things that wrench at your heart (treat - without the 's' )
Well done! You have a very soulful disposition. Debbie
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words and advice. I truly appreciate your insight.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Good work. Like your note at the end. Nice rhyming and image good. A comforting poem and one that achieves its purpose. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Good work. Like your note at the end. Nice rhyming and image good. A comforting poem and one that achieves its purpose. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your insight and inciting me to be better. I thank you for taking time out of your day to view my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a faithful post for the Easter period as the burden of our sins have been forgiven. I hope you have a wonderful Easter and than you for sharing your poem with us, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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This sounds like a faithful post for the Easter period as the burden of our sins have been forgiven. I hope you have a wonderful Easter and than you for sharing your poem with us, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind words and have a happy Easter as well. Best wishes.
Comment from Boogienights
I like this positive affimation, it's makes me feel uplifted. A very well done accostic in my humble opinion. There is so much negativity in this world, it's nice to read something soothing.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I like this positive affimation, it's makes me feel uplifted. A very well done accostic in my humble opinion. There is so much negativity in this world, it's nice to read something soothing.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind sentiment. have a great weekend!:-)
Comment from royowen
I love this poem, the truth of its words ring out its greeting, and the warning is to never listen to its wisdom. It's in the prophetic heart of the poet will God will spread, if we use our gift as a message to the love of God's heart...man, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I love this poem, the truth of its words ring out its greeting, and the warning is to never listen to its wisdom. It's in the prophetic heart of the poet will God will spread, if we use our gift as a message to the love of God's heart...man, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Again, thank you so much sir.
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Welcome
Comment from Mark Jackson
I like it but I think I am missing something here. I am unsure what Psalm 62 is so I looked it up and I see the word Salvation. Where has the word Deliverer come from? Is it your response to the Psalm or is it from the name of the Psalm. I ask you to put something in the notes for us Godless folk in Europe. Thanks.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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I like it but I think I am missing something here. I am unsure what Psalm 62 is so I looked it up and I see the word Salvation. Where has the word Deliverer come from? Is it your response to the Psalm or is it from the name of the Psalm. I ask you to put something in the notes for us Godless folk in Europe. Thanks.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the question, please review the following:
Salvation is the saving of a life from death or harm1. In the New Testament, salvation is extended to include deliverance from the penalty and power of sin through repentance and faith in Jesus Christ2. In the Old Testament, the concept of salvation is rooted in Israel's deliverance from Egypt in the Book of Exodus2. The biblical writers speak of salvation as a reality with spiritual and physical, individual and communal, objective and subjective, eternal and historical dimensions3.
The noun salvation denotes deliverance, preservation, safety, the context of the passage in which the word appears determining the nature of that deliverance. Sometimes the word is used to describe deliverance from physical danger and death.
"Salvation," as the term implies, is "rescue" ? rescue from hell but also from sin itself, its power and ultimately its very presence. We are brought into the experience of salvation now, in this life, although it is not yet in its fullness.
Salvation is the sovereign work of God through which He rescues and delivers fully the believing sinner from the guilt and penalty of sin. And He has only one way of saving men. All hope of man being saved through his own efforts came to an end at Calvary when Divine love completed the work of redemption through the death of Jesus Christ.
References
www.thegospelcoalition.org/essay/salvation-an-overview/
bible.org/article/doctrine-salvation
www.biblestudytools.com/dictionary/salvation
What Does "Salvation" Really Mean? " Kenneth Copeland ?kcm.org
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Got it, thank you.
Comment from karenina
What a wonderful Acrostic! Truly a devotional written with faith and grace...
Nice rhymes, a gentle silhouette of Psalm 62:1...
I think a spelling error here:
"DELVIERER and your burdens I will bear."
An easy edit for sure!
Six stars from me!
Blessings!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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What a wonderful Acrostic! Truly a devotional written with faith and grace...
Nice rhymes, a gentle silhouette of Psalm 62:1...
I think a spelling error here:
"DELVIERER and your burdens I will bear."
An easy edit for sure!
Six stars from me!
Blessings!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for noticing that. I will correct it right away. Have a great evening:-)
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You as well!
Comment from jessizero
I like that you chose to spell out the word "deliverer," and I really liked your rhymes. I also liked your author's notes that everything will be okay. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I like that you chose to spell out the word "deliverer," and I really liked your rhymes. I also liked your author's notes that everything will be okay. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your king sentiments.
Comment from Bethany Heart
With all the crisis going on in the world, people need to hear this message. It is well written and scriptural plus flows right into your heart that God cares. This devotional is a powerful way to convey the truth, and in a loving manner. The rhyming adds a type of comfort to keep you reading to the end.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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With all the crisis going on in the world, people need to hear this message. It is well written and scriptural plus flows right into your heart that God cares. This devotional is a powerful way to convey the truth, and in a loving manner. The rhyming adds a type of comfort to keep you reading to the end.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind word and have a great evening.
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is a good poem with an excellent reminder that we never need to panic. This is biblically based and attempts to bring a conversational style to this rhyming poem. I would encourage you to make it a little tighter and look at areas that seem a little bit awkward and see if you can replace words that maintain the same strategic thought. God bless you and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This is a good poem with an excellent reminder that we never need to panic. This is biblically based and attempts to bring a conversational style to this rhyming poem. I would encourage you to make it a little tighter and look at areas that seem a little bit awkward and see if you can replace words that maintain the same strategic thought. God bless you and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your advice and I will seek to improve.
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You are most welcome.
