Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am sorry for the loss of Robert Earl O'Reels. I was a daddy's girl and understand how hard it is for a daughter to loose her father. I lost my dad almost 10 years ago and it still hurts. You're in my prayers.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thanks and sorry for the late reply.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Gunner Lil

Excellent

An Excellent poem that has great sensory descriptions.
It is also an easy read that also has a nice flow with a good pace from line to line.
Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thanks again Gunner.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Hi, Ricky. The shades of grey can affect your mood if they continue to block the Son. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2024

Thanks papa and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky