My Butterfly
Taking chances5 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the One Line Poem contest. The photo that accompanies this piece is lovely and the poem seems to be written about that specific photo. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the One Line Poem contest. The photo that accompanies this piece is lovely and the poem seems to be written about that specific photo. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
I can truly see why you would like butterflies, attitudes are funny, even though moths are similar our attitudes to them aren't the same, we like lady bugs too, because the eat Aphids which can harm plants, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I can truly see why you would like butterflies, attitudes are funny, even though moths are similar our attitudes to them aren't the same, we like lady bugs too, because the eat Aphids which can harm plants, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you
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Bless you
Comment from Sallyo
Nice one-liner... except I think there's either a word or a bit of punctuation missing between "near" and "I". I might be wrong though, so I won't drop a star. Butterflies are like chances, right?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Nice one-liner... except I think there's either a word or a bit of punctuation missing between "near" and "I". I might be wrong though, so I won't drop a star. Butterflies are like chances, right?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Comment from jessizero
This was almost impossible to read, as your font and background color were so close to the same color. I had to copy and paste it into a word processor to be able to read it. It was a lovely one line poem, though. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This was almost impossible to read, as your font and background color were so close to the same color. I had to copy and paste it into a word processor to be able to read it. It was a lovely one line poem, though. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I found the text very hard to read. May be because I'm color blind. But thought I'd point this out. I thought this was a fun poem. The sight of a butterfly landing nearby was beautiful. I love how you want to reach out and try to capture that fleeting moment. Great job - this was a beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I found the text very hard to read. May be because I'm color blind. But thought I'd point this out. I thought this was a fun poem. The sight of a butterfly landing nearby was beautiful. I love how you want to reach out and try to capture that fleeting moment. Great job - this was a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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