Highway
a minute poem6 total reviews
Comment from Michael Craig
First off, I want to thank you for serving the United States and all of us. Your poem "Highway" is saying to me, when we travel, it brings us to a new beginning of what we see and experience. When you write your trip begins, at full force you know your work will be good. Drinking fine wine
relaxes you and you write one last line. Such a well ending.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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First off, I want to thank you for serving the United States and all of us. Your poem "Highway" is saying to me, when we travel, it brings us to a new beginning of what we see and experience. When you write your trip begins, at full force you know your work will be good. Drinking fine wine
relaxes you and you write one last line. Such a well ending.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Michael. Welcome to Fanstory, Brother.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Travelling the highway, and ready for the rest and recuperation after a long day, comes across tome in your Minute Poem for the contest Bill. Your middle verse reminded me of travels with the kids when they were young, with thoughts of
'are we there yet'. Enjoyed your words and the memories it brought up.
Thanks Bill,
valda
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Travelling the highway, and ready for the rest and recuperation after a long day, comes across tome in your Minute Poem for the contest Bill. Your middle verse reminded me of travels with the kids when they were young, with thoughts of
'are we there yet'. Enjoyed your words and the memories it brought up.
Thanks Bill,
valda
Comment Written 01-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Valda
Comment from judiverse
Great minute format. Rhyme and syllable count in order. I like that yellow cow. Best of luck in the contest. I don't know about eat clover. Maybe smell clover? I like the ending about writing one last line. judi
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Great minute format. Rhyme and syllable count in order. I like that yellow cow. Best of luck in the contest. I don't know about eat clover. Maybe smell clover? I like the ending about writing one last line. judi
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Judi. Oh, we are not to eat the clover?
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You're welcome. No, silly, you're supposed to eat the bees. judi
Comment from nomi338
Okay Bill, now that you have rhymed every rhyme, noted of every line, tried your best to waste my time. Your efforts came close but were not sublime, I can only say, better luck next time.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Okay Bill, now that you have rhymed every rhyme, noted of every line, tried your best to waste my time. Your efforts came close but were not sublime, I can only say, better luck next time.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Okay
Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed your Minute road trip poem. I think you can come up with another last line - unless you are just having fun with the form. I'd say something like "on mem'ries dine." Of course, it's your poem!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Enjoyed your Minute road trip poem. I think you can come up with another last line - unless you are just having fun with the form. I'd say something like "on mem'ries dine." Of course, it's your poem!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Helen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Coming home is always a joy after our adventure out and I enjoyed your scenic return home here Bill, good luck with the contest, this is an unusual Minute poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Coming home is always a joy after our adventure out and I enjoyed your scenic return home here Bill, good luck with the contest, this is an unusual Minute poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Dolly
