Moments linger
A poem47 total reviews
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine and powerful poem, Jesse's your attitude is one that's so difficult to feel but an attitude that a must if you want to stay sane and not drive yourself crazy
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Another fine and powerful poem, Jesse's your attitude is one that's so difficult to feel but an attitude that a must if you want to stay sane and not drive yourself crazy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Mike, for the six stars and insightful review.
Yes, I must remain sane.
You understand what I wanted to say, and I appreciate you.
Jesse
Comment from Begin Again
My sincere condolences for the loss of someone you loved so deeply. It's a painful emptiness that's hard to fill...thank heavens we have lasting memories to warm our hearts. Great job, Jesse.
Hugs, Carol
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My sincere condolences for the loss of someone you loved so deeply. It's a painful emptiness that's hard to fill...thank heavens we have lasting memories to warm our hearts. Great job, Jesse.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Spitfire
This made me think of the poet's sage remark "'tis better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all.'" I love that you look on the bright side of David's departure: a cherished memory to be savored forever.
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This made me think of the poet's sage remark "'tis better to have loved and lost then never to have loved at all.'" I love that you look on the bright side of David's departure: a cherished memory to be savored forever.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jesse,
Sorry about the loss of a love. I am glad there is no more pain. This shows that this relationship did you both good but you grew out of it.
It also reminds us that life and love go on.
Congrats on you 200th post.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan
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Hi Jesse,
Sorry about the loss of a love. I am glad there is no more pain. This shows that this relationship did you both good but you grew out of it.
It also reminds us that life and love go on.
Congrats on you 200th post.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
First of all - congratulations on your 200th milestone! That is an amazing accomplishment.
So sorry for your loss Jesse. But....thank you for sharing this tribute to David and the special memories you have.
Perfect last line to let us know that you are ok.
"I haven't lost. Only love to gain".
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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First of all - congratulations on your 200th milestone! That is an amazing accomplishment.
So sorry for your loss Jesse. But....thank you for sharing this tribute to David and the special memories you have.
Perfect last line to let us know that you are ok.
"I haven't lost. Only love to gain".
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Janet, for your kind and positive review. Yes, I'll be okay. There is only love to gain. I've learned a few lessons. I will use the last relationship as a springboard for better things ahead.
Thanks for your blessings,
Jesse
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Sorry for your loss. There are many people that move through our lives, everyone leaves some mark. I hope you quickly get to the point where you have more sweet memories than regrets. Let me know when you manage that. Good brave writing. Karen
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Sorry for your loss. There are many people that move through our lives, everyone leaves some mark. I hope you quickly get to the point where you have more sweet memories than regrets. Let me know when you manage that. Good brave writing. Karen
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Danielle Lillard
Beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it, and feel compelled to say, I am sorry for your loss. The dolphins are a lovely touch, they are so deeply intelligent and emotional creatures.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading it, and feel compelled to say, I am sorry for your loss. The dolphins are a lovely touch, they are so deeply intelligent and emotional creatures.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Danielle, for the six stars and heartwarming review. Yes, I love dolphins as well.
I don't believe we have met before.
If you are new to this site, welcome.
Thanks for your kind words.
May you have a wonderful upcoming week.
Jesse
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hello, Jesse! I'm saddened to hear this, but you have risen to the event with this beautiful and heartfelt poem. I pray it was cathartic for you to write, and I admire your bravery in sharing these moments with us.
Best, JohnC
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Hello, Jesse! I'm saddened to hear this, but you have risen to the event with this beautiful and heartfelt poem. I pray it was cathartic for you to write, and I admire your bravery in sharing these moments with us.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Jesse. .You expressed your feelings well throughout your poem. I'm glad you have fond memories of him. I like the picture. I think it goes well with your words. I liked the words: crystallized within. Very good job.
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Hi Jesse. .You expressed your feelings well throughout your poem. I'm glad you have fond memories of him. I like the picture. I think it goes well with your words. I liked the words: crystallized within. Very good job.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good morning, Jesse,
If I didn't know the backstory to your well-crafted and moving poem, I would still rate it with six stars for its moving imagery, voice, and emotive response it drew from me.
But I do know the backstory, and as such, please know that I respect your decision to share this moving post with readers; I hope it was cathartic for you to pen.
But most of all, know that you are worthy of love and laughter and all that is good in this world.
Thank you for sharing, Jesse.
Sending healing thoughts your way,
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Jesse,
If I didn't know the backstory to your well-crafted and moving poem, I would still rate it with six stars for its moving imagery, voice, and emotive response it drew from me.
But I do know the backstory, and as such, please know that I respect your decision to share this moving post with readers; I hope it was cathartic for you to pen.
But most of all, know that you are worthy of love and laughter and all that is good in this world.
Thank you for sharing, Jesse.
Sending healing thoughts your way,
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2024
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Good afternoon, Diane.
Thanks for the six stars and comforting review. Telling me I am worthy is just the ticket to help me through this grief.
You are right in that writing this was cathartic for me. I feel better now that I am sharing this with my FS friends.
I appreciate your healing thoughts, my friend.
Take care,
Jesse
