True Life
An observation of life today2 total reviews
Comment from Colorado Owl
You did a good job of describing some of the worst of life. Our Earth is a training ground, and our life is our attempt to do the best we can. Hopefully, we learn from our mistakes. Thank you.
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You did a good job of describing some of the worst of life. Our Earth is a training ground, and our life is our attempt to do the best we can. Hopefully, we learn from our mistakes. Thank you.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem does a wonderful job in sharing the challenges facing the planet we call home. I like how you show a contrast between the beauty of life's experiences and the harsh realities the life that some face shown so well. Great job - this is a wonderfully crafted sonnet with a powerful message.
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Your poem does a wonderful job in sharing the challenges facing the planet we call home. I like how you show a contrast between the beauty of life's experiences and the harsh realities the life that some face shown so well. Great job - this is a wonderfully crafted sonnet with a powerful message.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
