Not a Good Recipe
Words are like ingredients11 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Ginda,
This poem is a profound truth. Keep to anger is a bad recipe in keeping a relationship going.
Congrats of placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Hi Ginda,
This poem is a profound truth. Keep to anger is a bad recipe in keeping a relationship going.
Congrats of placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day.
Joan
Comment Written 15-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Joan, for your kind words and for sending congrats.
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You are very welcome on both accounts.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh, so true. Wounds heal but words touch our hearts and remain there for a very long time. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Oh, so true. Wounds heal but words touch our hearts and remain there for a very long time. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you the best of luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thanks for reading and for your good wishes.
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
This is true and reminds me of my poem "Venom." Words can poison a soul. It can definitely be bitter. This is a great, short poem. Good luck in the lune contest!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This is true and reminds me of my poem "Venom." Words can poison a soul. It can definitely be bitter. This is a great, short poem. Good luck in the lune contest!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Jodi, for your review and good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is great! It's short and to the point, but a powerful and important message in a few words. These are good words to live by, a wonderful entry for the lune contest. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This is great! It's short and to the point, but a powerful and important message in a few words. These are good words to live by, a wonderful entry for the lune contest. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 25-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Carol, for your review, your blessings, and the six stars.
Comment from BethShelby
These are very true words using the marinate and bitter taste as though thie recipe and it is in a sence. I recipe for causing some very hurtful problems. Perfect for the Lune contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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These are very true words using the marinate and bitter taste as though thie recipe and it is in a sence. I recipe for causing some very hurtful problems. Perfect for the Lune contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Beth.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Once a word is released, it is hard to erase it from our mind and if it is meant to harm us, it seems to repeat even more in our mind, a poignant post Ginda, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Once a word is released, it is hard to erase it from our mind and if it is meant to harm us, it seems to repeat even more in our mind, a poignant post Ginda, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Dolly.
Comment from Wendy G
A fine entry and a very true one. One always needs a marinade which tenderises the outcome - gentleness and forgiveness, not one which produces bitterness. You made a strong point in your clever lune, and I wishyou success in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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A fine entry and a very true one. One always needs a marinade which tenderises the outcome - gentleness and forgiveness, not one which produces bitterness. You made a strong point in your clever lune, and I wishyou success in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Wendy.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry contest. The syllable count meets the criteria. Perfect recipe for sleeping soundly and waking in a good mood. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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An excellent entry for the Lune Poetry contest. The syllable count meets the criteria. Perfect recipe for sleeping soundly and waking in a good mood. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from Jeano
This speaks loud and clear. Nicely done. Good recipe to live by, as an example to follow. Very well said and it appears to be 5-3-5. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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This speaks loud and clear. Nicely done. Good recipe to live by, as an example to follow. Very well said and it appears to be 5-3-5. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Jeano.
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You're welcome.
Comment from karenina
Great! Now let's all make copy of this...frame it...and put it in a place of prominence in our homes and places of employment! My grandmom used to say when I was angry and ready to spout unkind things, to "count to ten then count again."
Hmmm-- Let's make sure all politicians get this as well!
Harmful and harsh words can stay with us forever.
Karenina
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Great! Now let's all make copy of this...frame it...and put it in a place of prominence in our homes and places of employment! My grandmom used to say when I was angry and ready to spout unkind things, to "count to ten then count again."
Hmmm-- Let's make sure all politicians get this as well!
Harmful and harsh words can stay with us forever.
Karenina
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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Thanks, Karenina.
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You're welcome!
