The Big Reveal
Amy was shocked by her husband's newest painting17 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-written story. Your story reads and flow we. Your 55 word-count for this writing prompt is in good order. Your message is clear. Good twist at the end of the story. Nice complimentary picture.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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This is a well-written story. Your story reads and flow we. Your 55 word-count for this writing prompt is in good order. Your message is clear. Good twist at the end of the story. Nice complimentary picture.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from RJ Fuller
LOL, I love this! It's like you're teasing the reader because of the word count limitation. I definitely giggled at that last line! I'm wondering about that painting now, though. I'm a little concerned for Amy's obsessed husband, too. :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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LOL, I love this! It's like you're teasing the reader because of the word count limitation. I definitely giggled at that last line! I'm wondering about that painting now, though. I'm a little concerned for Amy's obsessed husband, too. :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2024
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Haha, thank you so much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-five-word story, The Big Reveal, has the required word count and finds a way to incorporate the challenge into the reding. That is a cool cliffhanger that ...
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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This fifty-five-word story, The Big Reveal, has the required word count and finds a way to incorporate the challenge into the reding. That is a cool cliffhanger that ...
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from jim vecchio
CONGRATULATIONS on your Milestone Post! It was a very good one, too, and I didn't see that end coming! Very good choice for this contest. Short in words but large in Talent.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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CONGRATULATIONS on your Milestone Post! It was a very good one, too, and I didn't see that end coming! Very good choice for this contest. Short in words but large in Talent.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Jim! xo
Comment from LJbutterfly
Haha! This is humorous. Your well chosen words tell a story that is succinct and interesting. However, the ending leaves the reader wanting more than the required 55 words. This is a clever entry. Best wishes in the contest.
Congrats on 200 posts.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Haha! This is humorous. Your well chosen words tell a story that is succinct and interesting. However, the ending leaves the reader wanting more than the required 55 words. This is a clever entry. Best wishes in the contest.
Congrats on 200 posts.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! :) xo
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your milestone post! You set up the story well, and I absolutely loved the humor in the end. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone post! You set up the story well, and I absolutely loved the humor in the end. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! :) xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a clever and humorous post and a play on both the picture and words here and you have still kept us in the dark as you only had 55 words, good luck with the contest, congrats on your 200th post too, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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This is a clever and humorous post and a play on both the picture and words here and you have still kept us in the dark as you only had 55 words, good luck with the contest, congrats on your 200th post too, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Dolly! :) xo
