Old McDonald
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Chapter 29"Dwayne is a failed veterinarian student who is
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
The entire scene was well written. I thought Tanya's fight and flight were well written. This easily kept my interest and I was very afraid for her.
His determination to track down Tanya and silence her before she could expose him to the world shows this is not over yet! Great job.
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The entire scene was well written. I thought Tanya's fight and flight were well written. This easily kept my interest and I was very afraid for her.
His determination to track down Tanya and silence her before she could expose him to the world shows this is not over yet! Great job.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
Comment from lancellot
Well, Tanya should die. She spoke like an idiot or like most people would in her case. The last thing a normal mind would consider is their own death. So, I agree with this chapter. Well done.
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Well, Tanya should die. She spoke like an idiot or like most people would in her case. The last thing a normal mind would consider is their own death. So, I agree with this chapter. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
