Night Visions
A sonnet27 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A magnificent sonnet, my talented friend. I loved everything about this! Beautifully crafted and illustrated and themed in dreams. I'm fascinated by them too.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and blessing to you all.
Sal Xos
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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A magnificent sonnet, my talented friend. I loved everything about this! Beautifully crafted and illustrated and themed in dreams. I'm fascinated by them too.
Sending you my best today as always, dear Jess, and blessing to you all.
Sal Xos
Comment Written 24-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2024
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My Sally, thank you so much!! Xoxox
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My pleasure, sweet Jess! Be blessed.
Love,
Sal Xoxo
Comment from Heather Knight
I also find the idea of dreams fascinating. My mum dreamt of things that later became true a couple of times. In my case, my dreams are usually a reflection of my fears.
Congratulations on your lovely sonnet. I'm unable to write formal poetry myself. Just prose and free verse.
Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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I also find the idea of dreams fascinating. My mum dreamt of things that later became true a couple of times. In my case, my dreams are usually a reflection of my fears.
Congratulations on your lovely sonnet. I'm unable to write formal poetry myself. Just prose and free verse.
Well done!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thanks so much, Heather!
Comment from jim vecchio
All I know is that there are vast worlds in my dreams, cityscapes, people of all kinds, in minute detail, it seems. It makes me ponder the mind of the Almighty, who fashioned our minds.
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All I know is that there are vast worlds in my dreams, cityscapes, people of all kinds, in minute detail, it seems. It makes me ponder the mind of the Almighty, who fashioned our minds.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
Comment from Wendy G
I agree. Dreams are very intriguing, and their meanings and interpretations have been significant throughout history. Your poem is very thoughtful, and very beautifully composed and presented. The imagery is very lyrical, the rhymes are smooth, the metre is perfect. And the notes are informative. Well done, it's very lovely.
Wendy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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I agree. Dreams are very intriguing, and their meanings and interpretations have been significant throughout history. Your poem is very thoughtful, and very beautifully composed and presented. The imagery is very lyrical, the rhymes are smooth, the metre is perfect. And the notes are informative. Well done, it's very lovely.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Wendy, thank you so much for this wonderful review. I apologize for my late response!! Xoxo
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Jessica.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I have often wondered about dreams over the years;
now they just seem weird.
-You do a great job with your sonnet.
-Excellent imagery establishes the premise in verse one.
-Verse two is a very good follow up to that.
-A very good volta as we wake to daylight,
especially the last line.
-A very good closing couplet that makes
a very good point about "wisdom of the night."
-A very good entry; good luck!!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Jessica.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I have often wondered about dreams over the years;
now they just seem weird.
-You do a great job with your sonnet.
-Excellent imagery establishes the premise in verse one.
-Verse two is a very good follow up to that.
-A very good volta as we wake to daylight,
especially the last line.
-A very good closing couplet that makes
a very good point about "wisdom of the night."
-A very good entry; good luck!!
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much, Pam! I am thrilled you enjoyed it :) xo
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You are very welcome, Jessica. You did a great job.
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Thanks so much, Pam. Happy Easter! Xo
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Happy Easter to you, too!
Comment from Mintybee
This poem had a mysterious, ethereal feel to it. I liked the rhyme scheme you chose. I feel it adds whimsy. The sonnet structure worked well.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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This poem had a mysterious, ethereal feel to it. I liked the rhyme scheme you chose. I feel it adds whimsy. The sonnet structure worked well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much! :) xo
Comment from lyenochka
All I can say is Wow! A stunning poem with such great metaphors and personification!y favorite part was :
"secrets of the stars, we're meant to keep.
Unfiltered are the thoughts our dreams explore;
Our minds cannot be closed when they're asleep."
Dreams play a big part in the Bible such as in lives of Jacob and Joseph's interpretation of Pharaoh's dreams and the NT Joseph being told to marry Mary and later to escape. Sometimes dreams reveal what more about ourselves and sometimes God can speak to us when we're not doing all the talking...
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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All I can say is Wow! A stunning poem with such great metaphors and personification!y favorite part was :
"secrets of the stars, we're meant to keep.
Unfiltered are the thoughts our dreams explore;
Our minds cannot be closed when they're asleep."
Dreams play a big part in the Bible such as in lives of Jacob and Joseph's interpretation of Pharaoh's dreams and the NT Joseph being told to marry Mary and later to escape. Sometimes dreams reveal what more about ourselves and sometimes God can speak to us when we're not doing all the talking...
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Helen, for this beautiful comment. I love what you said about God being able to speak to us when "we?re not doing all the talking". That is what I believe, wholeheartedly.
Thank you, again!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I like that you have included scientific theories about dreams in your author's notes. It plants our feet solidly on the ground, while your poem invites us to take flight and enjoy the mystery and the magic of dreams.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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I like that you have included scientific theories about dreams in your author's notes. It plants our feet solidly on the ground, while your poem invites us to take flight and enjoy the mystery and the magic of dreams.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Ginda! Xo
Comment from Mark Jackson
Very good, I know how difficult it is to write a sonnet, so many rules to keep to and not just rhymes. Your has it all it the idea of sleep and dream developed. Contrasted with being awake. The final two lines I find are the hardest to write and yours are excellent, leaving an idea of open minded wonder.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Very good, I know how difficult it is to write a sonnet, so many rules to keep to and not just rhymes. Your has it all it the idea of sleep and dream developed. Contrasted with being awake. The final two lines I find are the hardest to write and yours are excellent, leaving an idea of open minded wonder.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Mark, thank you so much for your lovely review and kind words. I truly appreciate it!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely sonnet about our dreams Jessica, and I loved the idea of slipping into the cradle of night's arms. As a child I had very graphic, frightening dreams, I'm not sure whose theory that would suit. Beautifully descriptive and a great use of alliteration Jessica. A lovely presentation.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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A lovely sonnet about our dreams Jessica, and I loved the idea of slipping into the cradle of night's arms. As a child I had very graphic, frightening dreams, I'm not sure whose theory that would suit. Beautifully descriptive and a great use of alliteration Jessica. A lovely presentation.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2024
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Valda, I appreciate that so much! Thank you.
Xo
