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Star Trust

a No Rules poem about travel

2 total reviews 
Comment from papa55mike
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Do you know that all space memorabilia is worth top dollar on the collecting circuit? Things like your maps can fetch a high dollar. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
    I wish! No, the map is actually in the book called MAP: Explore the World. It's a fabulous book, one that I keep out and actually browse through often. Thank you for reading me and for your kind words, Mike!
Comment from locust
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I really like the subject of this piece and almost wish it was longer. It feels like the beginning of a story to me, and not a poem. I believe approaching it as a poem threw me off and it took me a bit longer to get into it because of that. I would love to see it rewritten as a short story! Nice work!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
    Interesting! Thanks so much for this idea!