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The fable about shoes

leaving your shoes could be deadly

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Comment from jessizero
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I enjoyed your modern fable. It read like something that could easily be true, and the moral of the story was funny. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thanks jessizero
Comment from royowen
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You'd have to Australian to know about the red back spider, which is also the name of the SA cricket team, and those little critters like red back, like dark moist places as in shoes, so yes, take your shoes inside. Beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2024
    Thanks Roy
reply by royowen on 22-Mar-2024
    Most welcome