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I Found My Heart In San Francisco

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Fan Fiction Romance

2 total reviews 
Comment from Ronny Guy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Great romance story. There are a few gramatical errors. And you spelled Kara's name in three different ways. Karfa, Lakara, and Kara. I think Karfa might have been a spelling typo. Lakara to Kara I understand though. Kara being short for LA-kara. But overall, this is a great story. I was looking for the guy to meet and dance with Kara/Lakara. Are you working on a part two?...

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you Ronny. I appreciate it. I had a hard time posting this one. Thanks for recognizing her name is LaKara, and Kara is her nickname. Stay tuned. I do have more coming.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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I thought this was very enjoyable. I liked how Mikey expressed his criteria for a woman. I can't argue with what he wants - inner beauty and a genuine personality. You did a great job with this chapter. It was enjoyable. Easily kept my interest. And the characters are really coming alive.

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2024

reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
    Thank you Michael. I enjoyed writing this story too and I was real nervous about what anybody was going to think. I hope it is believable, and interesting. It was a long time coming.