Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Living On The Edge - Chap 16"The blending of good and evil.
17 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a great chapter, and you have all the right people knowing what they should know and not knowing something they should not know. I want to know your system for keeping everything organized when you finish this marathon.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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This is a great chapter, and you have all the right people knowing what they should know and not knowing something they should not know. I want to know your system for keeping everything organized when you finish this marathon.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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We are almost to the end, Carol. You are especially going to like the next two chapters...I think! Thank you so much for enjoying this one and for blessing me with the stars. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ooooh someone has thrown his comforter out of the cot!! LOL. I think this man needs sorting out, the law can't at the moment, but a few hooded people in a dark alley could!! I'll even lead them! Poor Layla, this is really good, Carol, now I'm heading off to the next chapter!! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Ooooh someone has thrown his comforter out of the cot!! LOL. I think this man needs sorting out, the law can't at the moment, but a few hooded people in a dark alley could!! I'll even lead them! Poor Layla, this is really good, Carol, now I'm heading off to the next chapter!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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I am blessed, Sandra! Can't wait to see what you think of the next two chapters... power packed I think! Can't believe that the story is almost ready to be wrapped up. chapter 19 will do it I think. I'm thrilled you loved it and thank you for the extra star. Smiles and hugs...Carol
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I'm off to read them now. xxx
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Thank you...I can't wait to see what you think!
Comment from Ulla
Wow, That was an explosive chapter, Carol. You are doing a great job with this story. I absolutely adore it. It's so full of action and wonderful surprises. Now what? Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Wow, That was an explosive chapter, Carol. You are doing a great job with this story. I absolutely adore it. It's so full of action and wonderful surprises. Now what? Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I just finished writing Chapter 17 but I will post it a little later. I need to make sure I am covering all the loose ends with my characters. It's been tougher to write these chapters than the whole story. I want it to be just right.
Smiles, Carol
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I can certainly understand that. I will be looking out for it. You have done a great job. Wonderful actually. x
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Thank you so much, Ulla. I can't express how much your thoughts and support mean to me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I cannot say enough about your hooks at the end of the chapter. I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. I cannot say enough about your hooks at the end of the chapter. I want to keep reading. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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You always make me smile and appreciate your continued encouragement. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
There are going to be a whole lot of awakenings coming very soon in this story. And I can hardly wait to see Harrison get whatever he has coming to him. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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There are going to be a whole lot of awakenings coming very soon in this story. And I can hardly wait to see Harrison get whatever he has coming to him. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Hello there! I think every reader is sitting on the edge of their seats, screaming for me to give Harrison the boot. LOL It's coming but I've got a few loose ends to wrap up first....
Hope you are having a great weekend.
Smiles, Carol
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I'm in no hurry for you to finish things up, so take your sweet time. Maybe torture that sucker a bit. LOL. Hugs, Ric
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LOL...This morning I had one reader tell me exactly what she wanted to do to him and I assure you it's nothing I can put in this novel. Torture sounds good though.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Richard has made many mistakes. The FBI is involved. Frank is going to turn the tables on him making sure the tables and everything are dumped in his lap. Richard is out of his mind with his lust for power, and has screwed over anyone in his way. The bill is past due. My opinion only. Great work. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Richard has made many mistakes. The FBI is involved. Frank is going to turn the tables on him making sure the tables and everything are dumped in his lap. Richard is out of his mind with his lust for power, and has screwed over anyone in his way. The bill is past due. My opinion only. Great work. Karen
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Yes, the "bad guy" is really a good guy and he's going to make "the chief" pay for his deeds. Must give him a great deal of satisfaction. Maybe FRankie should run for Mayor? lol
Smiles, Carol
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He would be slightly better than richard!Hurry up and save Layla. :-)
Comment from lyenochka
I wonder who it is. Maybe Garth? It's saved by the bell! Or FBI. Should Layla have told Harrison that Jake is FBI? I thought that was top secret. She's not handling this well. Hope they proved it wasn't Alyssa's body!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I wonder who it is. Maybe Garth? It's saved by the bell! Or FBI. Should Layla have told Harrison that Jake is FBI? I thought that was top secret. She's not handling this well. Hope they proved it wasn't Alyssa's body!
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I can't believe how man readers are happy that Garth jumped into this fiasco and is about to save the day. I am flattered that a character from another book made such an impression. (oh! you might have missed the part where the Chief had moles in the FBI and they warned him)...another chapter but I forget which one. I can't wait till he finds out that Alyssa is alive and well at Frankies.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Most excellent. I can see others are reviewing these stories well and you are going to run off with that contest! So love the way you get into the creepy criminal mind and portray the innocent Layla....
great story. Esther
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Most excellent. I can see others are reviewing these stories well and you are going to run off with that contest! So love the way you get into the creepy criminal mind and portray the innocent Layla....
great story. Esther
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Never count on winning contests on this site. At least I don't. I don't know what the criteria is for winning but I seldom have it anymore. But if the readers enjoy my efforts, that's compliments enough.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Good, the unscrupulous and evil chief of police will be caught out by his own words. Who has dared to interrupt him? Good for Layla being determined to fight but I hope she doesn't give too much away ... Another very well written chapter!
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Good, the unscrupulous and evil chief of police will be caught out by his own words. Who has dared to interrupt him? Good for Layla being determined to fight but I hope she doesn't give too much away ... Another very well written chapter!
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Wendy!
So glad to see you and know that you are enjoying the tug of war between the Chief and Layla. I think he's about to lose and it's going to be big time.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
I am a fine, upstanding Christian woman, and all I want to do is squeeze that chief's slimy balls as hard as I can.
Thank you, I got that off my chest.
If that was your intention, to provoke that feeling in the reader, then you are a masterful writer! :-)
Typo:
but later, you suggested she'd take a vacation. (taken)
Bravo! Julie
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I am a fine, upstanding Christian woman, and all I want to do is squeeze that chief's slimy balls as hard as I can.
Thank you, I got that off my chest.
If that was your intention, to provoke that feeling in the reader, then you are a masterful writer! :-)
Typo:
but later, you suggested she'd take a vacation. (taken)
Bravo! Julie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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Good morning, Julie
Of course you have me laughing this early morning. I think the author and the other readers feel exactly the same.... if they weren't so slimy we could have used them for easter eggs.... maybe the other snakes would like them.
Thank you for your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
