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Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Floating"I dare you....
15 total reviews
Comment from mmichelle97219
This poem has an air of voodoo surrounding it. It just carries that vibe. I loved the imagery, and the ending has a nice kind of kick to it. You seem to be thriving on these challenges.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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This poem has an air of voodoo surrounding it. It just carries that vibe. I loved the imagery, and the ending has a nice kind of kick to it. You seem to be thriving on these challenges.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2006
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2006
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hehehe
thanx lots! :-)
Comment from CarolinasAngel
I do love the pictures you chose. this is great, shelley. You have a telented hand with words. No prepare a manuscript and get published. I wanna an autographed copy ASAP!
Candy
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I do love the pictures you chose. this is great, shelley. You have a telented hand with words. No prepare a manuscript and get published. I wanna an autographed copy ASAP!
Candy
Comment Written 30-Jul-2006
Comment from wintersknights
this poem just floated
the rhythm flowed as of an old river
going on its unhurried way.
I did enjoy it a lot since it slowed me down and made me think.
good work dear and thank you
wk
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this poem just floated
the rhythm flowed as of an old river
going on its unhurried way.
I did enjoy it a lot since it slowed me down and made me think.
good work dear and thank you
wk
Comment Written 30-Jul-2006
Comment from Lisloh
Smile...:) LOL
Yeah, this was good Shelley---nice flow and the tale told itself....
Challenge met!
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation!
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Smile...:) LOL
Yeah, this was good Shelley---nice flow and the tale told itself....
Challenge met!
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Excellent presentation!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2006
Comment from Beatlegirl61
Really an excellent challenge and you have done quite well here...I want to play! ahha ::))))
I thought this was a brilliant piece with a dreamy sort of 'ring' to it...It seemed like you were describing a dream, yet it could be really happening as well! Nice job and I will definitely be joining your circle this weekend! Thanks for sharing!
Take care and be well...Carol ::)
'beatle' quote today: "Yesterday...all my troubles seemed so far away..."
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Really an excellent challenge and you have done quite well here...I want to play! ahha ::))))
I thought this was a brilliant piece with a dreamy sort of 'ring' to it...It seemed like you were describing a dream, yet it could be really happening as well! Nice job and I will definitely be joining your circle this weekend! Thanks for sharing!
Take care and be well...Carol ::)
'beatle' quote today: "Yesterday...all my troubles seemed so far away..."
Comment Written 29-Jul-2006
Comment from luna
This was great my friend! You rose to my challenge and THEN SOME! Everything, as usual is perfect! I would get down on my knees but in my current state that would pain me and I'm not into that, believe me I've had plenty the past week, so let me just praise you to high heaven!
And thank you for the obvious effort put into this!
Your friend,
J
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This was great my friend! You rose to my challenge and THEN SOME! Everything, as usual is perfect! I would get down on my knees but in my current state that would pain me and I'm not into that, believe me I've had plenty the past week, so let me just praise you to high heaven!
And thank you for the obvious effort put into this!
Your friend,
J
Comment Written 29-Jul-2006
Comment from Zenbud
How fun. You rose to this challenge very well, Shelley. The color scheme was perfect for the subject. A story in verse is one of my favorite forms - I could almost feel the humidity! lol. Kairos
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How fun. You rose to this challenge very well, Shelley. The color scheme was perfect for the subject. A story in verse is one of my favorite forms - I could almost feel the humidity! lol. Kairos
Comment Written 28-Jul-2006
Comment from KING SLATON
I like this piece.
I like the way it flows comfortably down river while I was reading it.
This piece just takes the reader on a nice little mind ride.
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I like this piece.
I like the way it flows comfortably down river while I was reading it.
This piece just takes the reader on a nice little mind ride.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2006
Comment from Rewa Malhotra
Entertaining is the word here. You dig something,you get something else.
It was a good journey in the past,and with a bump,back in the present.
Well written
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Entertaining is the word here. You dig something,you get something else.
It was a good journey in the past,and with a bump,back in the present.
Well written
Comment Written 28-Jul-2006
Comment from Swagman
I thought this was really cool, different, original, loved the idea of floating down the bayou. There's plenty of vivid description to go with a great picture choice which makes your poem look well presented. This has good flow for me, the first verse I found to be completely engaging, it hooked me into reading the whole poem.
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I thought this was really cool, different, original, loved the idea of floating down the bayou. There's plenty of vivid description to go with a great picture choice which makes your poem look well presented. This has good flow for me, the first verse I found to be completely engaging, it hooked me into reading the whole poem.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2006
