Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Aftermath"Book Four Wolf Bend Series
6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I somehow missed this chapter but I assume this one is on hold now until you finish your March book. Good to see Jenny regaining her senses and more work ahead as another body is discovered. Lilith is a very busy killer! Great job, Doug! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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I somehow missed this chapter but I assume this one is on hold now until you finish your March book. Good to see Jenny regaining her senses and more work ahead as another body is discovered. Lilith is a very busy killer! Great job, Doug! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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No, still posting this on Sundays. Only because the Lilith book is finished already!
Comment from royowen
It looks like they've located Lilith, at least another body to add to the mounting collection of atrocities that she's committed, so nobody can afford to relax, it's ever onward and upward, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : who (is) really like him
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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It looks like they've located Lilith, at least another body to add to the mounting collection of atrocities that she's committed, so nobody can afford to relax, it's ever onward and upward, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : who (is) really like him
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Roy!
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Welcome Douglad
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm glad Jenny will be all right and Greg got a moment of peace, I did say a moment. But how he'll be back in the thick of it. I can't wait for more. This is another good write.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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I'm glad Jenny will be all right and Greg got a moment of peace, I did say a moment. But how he'll be back in the thick of it. I can't wait for more. This is another good write.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thanks Barbara! Back after Lilith!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very nice movement in this chapter.
...they may have found the badguys hideout - (badguy's)
So the mayor is going to deliver Greg's speech?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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Very nice movement in this chapter.
...they may have found the badguys hideout - (badguy's)
So the mayor is going to deliver Greg's speech?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2024
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I no think the Mayor has won. Now, about that pesky Lilith broad?
Comment from Julie Helms
So that was satisfying. And such a public arrest! But the beat goes on.
woman had her eyes closed, and had been sleeping (no comma)
sporting a black eye and there were several bruises (eye, and)
Barry's out of surgery and it looks (surgery, and)
Three down officers (downed ?)
As usual, great writing and storyline! Julie
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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So that was satisfying. And such a public arrest! But the beat goes on.
woman had her eyes closed, and had been sleeping (no comma)
sporting a black eye and there were several bruises (eye, and)
Barry's out of surgery and it looks (surgery, and)
Three down officers (downed ?)
As usual, great writing and storyline! Julie
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Julie! You are always a big help!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I had to wait a couple of hours so i could give you a six. Some very nice people told me they were waiting to read me so they could that too. They are pretty shiny things are they not? :-)
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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I had to wait a couple of hours so i could give you a six. Some very nice people told me they were waiting to read me so they could that too. They are pretty shiny things are they not? :-)
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2024
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Oh my goodness, but this is a shiny review! You are the first one to ever say they waited. Hey, I did email you last week. You didn't get it?
