Isla de Oro: A Pirate Story
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Papers"A story of bravery, faith, and family.
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Comment from lancellot
Interesting chapter, well written. You can really feel the young man's guilt. Will his secret get out, and what would the others do?
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Ch 1 The Boarding {â??} The pirates are attacking the ship and
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and one said that he was an undead {spiritâ?"} rejected by Davy Jones himself.
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The pirates found the fresh beer stores as the sun had begun to set {â?"} nearly a whole day after they first attacked {â?"} and they began to carouse.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Interesting chapter, well written. You can really feel the young man's guilt. Will his secret get out, and what would the others do?
notes:Â
Ch 1 The Boarding {â??} The pirates are attacking the ship and
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and one said that he was an undead {spiritâ?"} rejected by Davy Jones himself.
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The pirates found the fresh beer stores as the sun had begun to set {â?"} nearly a whole day after they first attacked {â?"} and they began to carouse.
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thanks! I just made the edits. Stay tuned for more!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nicely done. This is a strong chapter. It easily kept my interest. You can feel the tension. The Reverend stepping up and sharing his story was well done. Excellent use of dialogue. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Very nicely done. This is a strong chapter. It easily kept my interest. You can feel the tension. The Reverend stepping up and sharing his story was well done. Excellent use of dialogue. Great job.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thanks! Stay tuned for more!
