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A true story

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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This account has many sensory comforting descriptions that hopefully the reader may engage in vicariously. . I love ginkgo leaves we used to take our patients for a walk and I always stopped at the ginkgo tree and I took some of those leaves just to have an example of them. This was a lovely retelling.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

Comment from Ric Myworld
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This is one of those stories I enjoyed from beginning to end. I love birds and especially hummingbirds. I have six feeders out back, and three hummingbird feeders out front. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I really enjoyed your story. It is well written. I love hummingbirds. Last year. I changed using the red stuff and made my own food. Just Sugar and water. I saw a lot more hummingbirds like 5. One even came close to me on the porch. They are truly amazing creatures. Your story flowed very nicely. I really enjoyed it. Great job

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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I believe loved ones Spirits do visit and come through to us. It's happened to me and there are always clues or coincidences, signs. This story is well written and interesting. Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

Comment from Kelly Hope
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This was a very interesting read. I'm almost certain. I will have to go back and reread this a second time to really understand this the write way. Very great job.

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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Welcome back! So good to read this post as I remember you had shared about selling your family home during the April poetry contest. And now you share about your remarkable father and the little miracles of how the Lord allowed him to still communicate with you as you continue to honor him with your writings and that SHINE project. Best wishes in the contest!

Can you give more info about SHINE in your notes?

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
    Thank you so much! It's been a long while. Thank you for remembering about my poetry of our family home. You seem like a dear friend. What a great suggestion! I will add my notes about the SHINE program. I appreciate you!