Butt of a Joke
Just for Fun (5-7-5)13 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
You made me laugh before morning coffee, a difficult deed for sure. Yours does stand out from the others, but I must read them all, before voting. You should do well with or without my vote.
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You made me laugh before morning coffee, a difficult deed for sure. Yours does stand out from the others, but I must read them all, before voting. You should do well with or without my vote.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2024
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
It is good to see some of the planets expressed in some of the poetry. They are ready to send some astronauts to the moon; I was thinking of this while reading your poem. We had an author who loved to write about astronomy; she has passed, and she's missed.
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It is good to see some of the planets expressed in some of the poetry. They are ready to send some astronauts to the moon; I was thinking of this while reading your poem. We had an author who loved to write about astronomy; she has passed, and she's missed.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from teafor2
Unknown bard, truly satirical and funny as heck! These compressed sparse
syllables more than fit the bill for the stated writing prompt. Title is cute and a perfect match for verbiage. Good luck in the "Just for Fun (5-7-5)." teafor2
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Unknown bard, truly satirical and funny as heck! These compressed sparse
syllables more than fit the bill for the stated writing prompt. Title is cute and a perfect match for verbiage. Good luck in the "Just for Fun (5-7-5)." teafor2
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
It's fun and complies fully with the brief! I like the mischief and imagination here in your very bold 5-7-5 verse. Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie
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It's fun and complies fully with the brief! I like the mischief and imagination here in your very bold 5-7-5 verse. Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from bob cullen
You have a sick mind. Fortunately for you, there are readers like me around whose minds are even sicker. I absolutely loved the irreverence in this piece. It has brightened my morning immeasurably. Thank you, I can't stop laughing.
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You have a sick mind. Fortunately for you, there are readers like me around whose minds are even sicker. I absolutely loved the irreverence in this piece. It has brightened my morning immeasurably. Thank you, I can't stop laughing.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This 5-7-5 poem did make me laugh! Butt humor in general is never not funny in my humble opinion lol But my mentality is that of a 12 year old. this one was lot of fun! Nice going.
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This 5-7-5 poem did make me laugh! Butt humor in general is never not funny in my humble opinion lol But my mentality is that of a 12 year old. this one was lot of fun! Nice going.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
Comment from SimianSavant
Related 5-7-5:
Why did Mars turn red?
Because it saw Uranus
with its brownish rings
Uranus jokes will never get old. If you are in the mood, some subtle imagery might nicely complement this piece. I'm thinking uncensored AI art. It can get wildly creative so be careful.
Best,
Harambe (for President)
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Related 5-7-5:
Why did Mars turn red?
Because it saw Uranus
with its brownish rings
Uranus jokes will never get old. If you are in the mood, some subtle imagery might nicely complement this piece. I'm thinking uncensored AI art. It can get wildly creative so be careful.
Best,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHA. Yep, that's me and my ten-year-old sense of humor totally loving this entry! Immature as hell and damn proud of it!
Here's a theme-and-variation on this delightful entry: How is the Starship Enterprise like a roll of toilet paper?
It goes around Uranus and wipes out Kling-ons.
You're welcome.
Good luck on Voting Day, Mystery Poet. xo
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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HAHAHAHA. Yep, that's me and my ten-year-old sense of humor totally loving this entry! Immature as hell and damn proud of it!
Here's a theme-and-variation on this delightful entry: How is the Starship Enterprise like a roll of toilet paper?
It goes around Uranus and wipes out Kling-ons.
You're welcome.
Good luck on Voting Day, Mystery Poet. xo
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2024
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Your humor is a poem all by itself. Thank you for a very nice review.
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The syllable count of mine is off, though...kind of like my sense of humor!
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. Bidding you success in the contest. Very nice poem.
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is in good order for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. Bidding you success in the contest. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, why are you looking? Ha! Okay, I actually did laugh.
I think there is going to be some stuff co petition in this contest with all you witty bastards running amuck.
Good luck!
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Well, why are you looking? Ha! Okay, I actually did laugh.
I think there is going to be some stuff co petition in this contest with all you witty bastards running amuck.
Good luck!
D
Comment Written 08-Mar-2024
