Murphy P.I.
Murphy goes into his detective mode23 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I enjoyed your story about Murphy P.I. and his search to find the culprit snake. Well written from Murphy 's P.O.V
with some amusing scenes like the big white water bowl, with the lid down. A good read,
Cheers
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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I enjoyed your story about Murphy P.I. and his search to find the culprit snake. Well written from Murphy 's P.O.V
with some amusing scenes like the big white water bowl, with the lid down. A good read,
Cheers
Comment Written 22-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind words!
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, though not a cat or pet owner, I thought this very cute. I can see it going over well with both cat lovers and young children. I think having the sentences and paragraphs not overly long helps with the young readers. Good idea.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Hmm, though not a cat or pet owner, I thought this very cute. I can see it going over well with both cat lovers and young children. I think having the sentences and paragraphs not overly long helps with the young readers. Good idea.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from nomi338
When two buds work together to defend a third, no offender has a chance to do anything but run away and try to hide. Murphy and Jessie took care of business and their human friend did the next needed thing.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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When two buds work together to defend a third, no offender has a chance to do anything but run away and try to hide. Murphy and Jessie took care of business and their human friend did the next needed thing.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Had fun with this one. Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from Mintybee
The cat as a main character was interesting. I like that you made him protective of the dog and the people as opposed to the typical cat attitude. felt the end was a bit rushed. The humans and the dog were gone, then suddenly they're back. If you'd said the human pulled up in the car or something, that would have worked better, I think. But I liked the plot, the character, the POV, and the story overall.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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The cat as a main character was interesting. I like that you made him protective of the dog and the people as opposed to the typical cat attitude. felt the end was a bit rushed. The humans and the dog were gone, then suddenly they're back. If you'd said the human pulled up in the car or something, that would have worked better, I think. But I liked the plot, the character, the POV, and the story overall.
Mintybee
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the input!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a great and very satisfying story about talking animals and their quest to protect Amanda from harm. I must admit I didn't know where the story was going. That was some build-up. But it was worth the wait. Some clever decoy planning too on the part of Murphy (the detective). "Murphy licked Jessie('s) head and ran through the (open) kitchen door to find Rex." Great job! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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What a great and very satisfying story about talking animals and their quest to protect Amanda from harm. I must admit I didn't know where the story was going. That was some build-up. But it was worth the wait. Some clever decoy planning too on the part of Murphy (the detective). "Murphy licked Jessie('s) head and ran through the (open) kitchen door to find Rex." Great job! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This story is well written, interesting and relatable in some way. any human who has a pet knows how carrying they can be. I like the dialogue you wrote between the animals. Excellent writing with good descriptions and imagery, too. Thank you for sharing this.
One note:
Murphy licked Jessie('s) head again.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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This story is well written, interesting and relatable in some way. any human who has a pet knows how carrying they can be. I like the dialogue you wrote between the animals. Excellent writing with good descriptions and imagery, too. Thank you for sharing this.
One note:
Murphy licked Jessie('s) head again.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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Thank for stopping by and for your input too!
Comment from JP_Ryan
this was a lovely little story, how sweet that the cat was so protective over not just the little girl but the dog as well. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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this was a lovely little story, how sweet that the cat was so protective over not just the little girl but the dog as well. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2024
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It was fun to write. Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an inventive story and I enjoyed the antics of this cat with his friends and I agree with you that cats are like detectives as they don't miss a trick, an entertaining sweet story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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This is an inventive story and I enjoyed the antics of this cat with his friends and I agree with you that cats are like detectives as they don't miss a trick, an entertaining sweet story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Thank you for stopping by. Was a fun write.
Comment from jim vecchio
Sorry, all I have are fives. Very well done. You should have posted this in the "Animal Crackers" Club. I'd write one but I'm not as good as you! Two small concerns: I have a difficult time, sometimes on this site. You have to play at times with the fonts. Yours changed, but not too significantly, through the story. Also, very small
Now perplexed he ran straight to the little girl's room-commas needed after perplexed. Now, that's nitpicking. If your friends don't tell you, who will?:
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Sorry, all I have are fives. Very well done. You should have posted this in the "Animal Crackers" Club. I'd write one but I'm not as good as you! Two small concerns: I have a difficult time, sometimes on this site. You have to play at times with the fonts. Yours changed, but not too significantly, through the story. Also, very small
Now perplexed he ran straight to the little girl's room-commas needed after perplexed. Now, that's nitpicking. If your friends don't tell you, who will?:
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Yes, the fonts seem to jump around. Happy you liked the story and thank you!
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There are many glitches on this site. Fortunately, I love a good challenge!
Comment from Ric Myworld
What a fun and entertaining story, and since I'm a big sucker for happy endings, I could have liked your ending better. Good writing. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your posts.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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What a fun and entertaining story, and since I'm a big sucker for happy endings, I could have liked your ending better. Good writing. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more of your posts.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2024
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Happy you enjoyed this little tale.
Thank you!
