Dago Red
poem 5/7/56 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
Reds are my favorite wine, and a glass from one of those barrels would be amazing. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Reds are my favorite wine, and a glass from one of those barrels would be amazing. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful review
Comment from jessizero
I had never heard "Dago Red" before, so your author's notes were helpful. Your poem was nice. I think you are one syllable short on that second line, but that could be a matter of dialect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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I had never heard "Dago Red" before, so your author's notes were helpful. Your poem was nice. I think you are one syllable short on that second line, but that could be a matter of dialect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2024
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You are so right. Thank you, I have changed. I wish more reviewers would point errors out.
Comment from Sally Law
This one says more in just three lines. Beautifully crafted and illustrated in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This one says more in just three lines. Beautifully crafted and illustrated in short verse poetry. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :))
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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As always, Sally, your reviews are welcomed and appreciated.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A beautiful entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your words conjure up visuals, scent and taste. I love the picture you chose and the background color used. Very nice work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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A beautiful entry for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. Your words conjure up visuals, scent and taste. I love the picture you chose and the background color used. Very nice work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you for the lovely review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds exciting Val and my husband used to make home-made wine too. I love Italian wines and I enjoyed your inventive 5-7-5 for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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This sounds exciting Val and my husband used to make home-made wine too. I love Italian wines and I enjoyed your inventive 5-7-5 for the contest, good luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. Was your husband Italian? Those smells never leave you, nor the love and time put into the effort of making wine.
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No, he was English x
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Thanks, Dolly. You're a sweetheart
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your 5-7-5 does a wonderful job of capturing nostalgia. The imagery of barrels fermenting wine in a musty basement evokes is wonderful. I love the phrase "my heart remembers". Perfect. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Your 5-7-5 does a wonderful job of capturing nostalgia. The imagery of barrels fermenting wine in a musty basement evokes is wonderful. I love the phrase "my heart remembers". Perfect. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2024
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Thank you, "nostalgia" was exactly what I was after. I have never forgotten those scents or the time and effort wine making takes. Truly a labor of love.
