2024 Japanese Poetry
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6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my!!! Yes, true love can conquer even seven seas, rolling hill, and wonder lust. Once again, your presentation was perfect. Thank you for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Oh my!!! Yes, true love can conquer even seven seas, rolling hill, and wonder lust. Once again, your presentation was perfect. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very, Barbara, may you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool gogyohka suite
nice dream-filled imagery
and a smooth flow from line to line
cool pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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cool gogyohka suite
nice dream-filled imagery
and a smooth flow from line to line
cool pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very, Shelley.
may you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
even though the sea... and in fact seven of them is referred to, all I can see is stars and constellations of dreaming and desire, floating and intimate connection.
Wanderlust was my dream. I wanted to travel through Europe. I had a plan to go and play rugby league in England so I'd be close to every country I would have love to have visited... Spain always held my heart as if I lived had past lives there... but it was never to be, as a badly timed ban on international players in England thwarted my plans... and then life got in the way and my opportunity was lost... ah well!
See what you poems do to me? One second I'm reading away, absorbing, immersing myself within your words... next I'm off with the fairies in some distant memory of what could have been.
I think it was your last verse... there is such freedom and gay abandon within the image you so deftly painted with your words.
Beautiful composition, construction and presentation MariVal.
With our thoughts we create...
images where love dwells.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Hi MariVal,
even though the sea... and in fact seven of them is referred to, all I can see is stars and constellations of dreaming and desire, floating and intimate connection.
Wanderlust was my dream. I wanted to travel through Europe. I had a plan to go and play rugby league in England so I'd be close to every country I would have love to have visited... Spain always held my heart as if I lived had past lives there... but it was never to be, as a badly timed ban on international players in England thwarted my plans... and then life got in the way and my opportunity was lost... ah well!
See what you poems do to me? One second I'm reading away, absorbing, immersing myself within your words... next I'm off with the fairies in some distant memory of what could have been.
I think it was your last verse... there is such freedom and gay abandon within the image you so deftly painted with your words.
Beautiful composition, construction and presentation MariVal.
With our thoughts we create...
images where love dwells.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
Your soul shines like a million stars, no wonder you prefer the constellations.
It reminds me of a movie I recently watched on Netflix, called "Spaceman" starring Adam Sandler. Adam is the spaceman, who goes to the edge of our solar system on a mission to explore a mysterious purple cloud phenomenon. He misses his wife and he is very lonely which leads him to hallucinate about a giant spider that talks and offers wise advice. I recommend it.
my poem is about that intimate connection you mention. As always, you know exactly what I mean.
I dream about traveling across the world but unless I win the lottery, I don't think it's going to happen in this lifetime.
I wish you could have traveled through Europe to play rughy. I understand how you feel.
My daughter went to England and Paris on vacation, she loved it.
You would love Spain, the food, the wine, the flamenco dancers, the friendly people, the castles and cathedrals... so much to explore.
I am sorry my poem triggered some painful memories... or maybe they are good memories. I don't know. But I am happy you felt something, that is my aim when I write. I do want to paint pictures with my words, so I am happy you got that. I know you are a visual person too.
am happy you like the presentation, I spend a lot of time creating it. Many times, the presentation takes longer than the poem.
Amigos para siempre,
MariVal
Love lives in the heart and passionate yearning lives in the soul.
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Definitely...
Amigos para siempre MariVal!
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely poem about the exuberance of love which crosses all the physical dimensions like the seas and lasts through all the seasons like the "reaping season."
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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A lovely poem about the exuberance of love which crosses all the physical dimensions like the seas and lasts through all the seasons like the "reaping season."
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you, big sister. May you have a wonderful night.
Love
Marival
Comment from royowen
Not only do I love the poem but the artwork is really quite divinely appropriate, well done Gypsy, it's really good my friend, I commend you for daring to be different, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Not only do I love the poem but the artwork is really quite divinely appropriate, well done Gypsy, it's really good my friend, I commend you for daring to be different, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
Gypsy hugs
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Welcome
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good theme, a strong poem, and beautiful presentation. The colorful imagery pops out at the readers visually and as the words flow so perfectly. Well done!
Alexan :)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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This is a good theme, a strong poem, and beautiful presentation. The colorful imagery pops out at the readers visually and as the words flow so perfectly. Well done!
Alexan :)
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Alexan.
Gypsy hugs
