lake
a haiku about nature7 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. Very nice poem.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. Your poem reads and flows well. Your 5-7-5 syllable count is on point for this contest. Each line connects well with the next. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and support
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You are welcome.
Comment from jaded831
You created a beautiful picture with your words. It reminds me of childhood when troubles were few, and we took pleasure in simple things. You should do very well in the contest. Great job.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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You created a beautiful picture with your words. It reminds me of childhood when troubles were few, and we took pleasure in simple things. You should do very well in the contest. Great job.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review and support
Comment from LoAnn Beery
This was so relaxing and visual! It immediately took me back to those days at the lake. As a matter of fact your writing made my day. I am so ready for spring. Great nature haiku!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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This was so relaxing and visual! It immediately took me back to those days at the lake. As a matter of fact your writing made my day. I am so ready for spring. Great nature haiku!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Julie Helms
The action points in your nature haiku are very interesting. The first and third line are just so peaceful, relaxing, lazy on a summer day. And the second line zips through like the skipping stones you wrote about. I guess what I'm trying to say is the feel of the words you used are also accurate to the story you're telling! Nicely done! Julie
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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The action points in your nature haiku are very interesting. The first and third line are just so peaceful, relaxing, lazy on a summer day. And the second line zips through like the skipping stones you wrote about. I guess what I'm trying to say is the feel of the words you used are also accurate to the story you're telling! Nicely done! Julie
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely nature Haiku making good use of limited words and creating very descriptive images with words. If I could suggest adding anything it would be to say that a picture would add even more to the poem and I am sure you could find a free image to use that perfectly represents the poem. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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A lovely nature Haiku making good use of limited words and creating very descriptive images with words. If I could suggest adding anything it would be to say that a picture would add even more to the poem and I am sure you could find a free image to use that perfectly represents the poem. Nicely written.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review, I?m not sure how to add art work though
Comment from tempeste
Ciao!
Your poem brought back sweet memories of when I lived near the lake side and often skimmed stones.
I like your closing line : fallen leaves which suggests it's on a lazy autumn day .
I adore autumn!
PS: Shame no artwork to enjoy though your words alone were very impactful .
That's called well penned poetry !
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Ciao!
Your poem brought back sweet memories of when I lived near the lake side and often skimmed stones.
I like your closing line : fallen leaves which suggests it's on a lazy autumn day .
I adore autumn!
PS: Shame no artwork to enjoy though your words alone were very impactful .
That's called well penned poetry !
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you, but don?t know how to add artwork though
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Easy peasy ! 😐
Using your computer, Open the page where you write your poem.
Look above where you wrote the title of your poem .
You will see : image and select from your computer.
Click on the phrase : select from your computer
A window will open in the centre of your computer.
Click on : drop your files or click to add one.
Another window will open on the left, above ?
You can now click on your photo file and choose any photo
then Click open
And then you will see it uploaded on first window.
Press : upload
then click on : yes continue
click then on SAVE below on poem page like usual
And Viola! 🙂
Best of luck! 🍀
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Were you able to follow my instructions?
Comment from RodG
Your Nature 5-7-5 gives us a vivid picture of a man standing at the edge of a peaceful lake skimming stones across the water full of floating leaves. Very nice use of alliteration to create a serene mood. Rod
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Your Nature 5-7-5 gives us a vivid picture of a man standing at the edge of a peaceful lake skimming stones across the water full of floating leaves. Very nice use of alliteration to create a serene mood. Rod
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your review
