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Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "whispers. . ."keep your hope alive....
23 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Congratulations! Beautiful haiku. To me it's more haiku than seryu.
I love the presentation. Great juxtaposition of bare branches and bare memories.
Well done
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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Congratulations! Beautiful haiku. To me it's more haiku than seryu.
I love the presentation. Great juxtaposition of bare branches and bare memories.
Well done
Comment Written 03-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2024
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probably lol. thank you gypsy! 😎✌️💙🖋️🦄
Comment from BermyBye50
Shelley,
Congrats on your win in the Write A Senryu contest. Your short but creative poem is an exceptional example of a Senryu. The syllable count is perfect and the imagery and inspirational message in the 3 lines of the poem is brilliant. I'm only sorry that I don't have 6 stars to give. This Senryu however is deserving of 10 stars+
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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Shelley,
Congrats on your win in the Write A Senryu contest. Your short but creative poem is an exceptional example of a Senryu. The syllable count is perfect and the imagery and inspirational message in the 3 lines of the poem is brilliant. I'm only sorry that I don't have 6 stars to give. This Senryu however is deserving of 10 stars+
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 09-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2024
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thank you bermy! 😎✌️💙🖋️🌼🦄
Comment from SimianSavant
Extraordinarily well thought out and presented, both visually and with the wordplay. I rarely give out sixes for short works like this, but yours deserves it.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Extraordinarily well thought out and presented, both visually and with the wordplay. I rarely give out sixes for short works like this, but yours deserves it.
Regards,
Harambe (for President)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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cool!! thank you harambe! :-)
Comment from jaded831
You playfully painted a picture. I read your poem over a few times I enjoyed it more and more each time. The multicolored font added to the magical experience of your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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You playfully painted a picture. I read your poem over a few times I enjoyed it more and more each time. The multicolored font added to the magical experience of your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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coolcoolcool - thank you jade! :-)
Comment from Lisasview
Good morning mystery writer from Lisasview in beautiful Spain...As an artist I love your choice of the image and the font and the colours.. Really so very nice....
Good luck in the contest!!!
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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Good morning mystery writer from Lisasview in beautiful Spain...As an artist I love your choice of the image and the font and the colours.. Really so very nice....
Good luck in the contest!!!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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thank you lisa!! :-)
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Oh it was you the mystery writer...so nice to know,
Lisa
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lol 😊✌️
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cute
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a great Senryu. I especially like the last line that has two different meanings. The second meaning should be "leaves bear memories." But I get it.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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This is a great Senryu. I especially like the last line that has two different meanings. The second meaning should be "leaves bear memories." But I get it.
Excellent.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2024
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lol! thank you jasmine :-)
Comment from Wendy G
That is an excellent Senryu, with a fine choice of image to accompany your thoughts. Your words are thoughtful and express truth. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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That is an excellent Senryu, with a fine choice of image to accompany your thoughts. Your words are thoughtful and express truth. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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thank you wendy! :-)
Comment from Neil Samways
A nice haiku, leaves like memories from the past can float away in autumn to creat new leaves(memories) in the spring. Giving new life and hope and a future not yet told.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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A nice haiku, leaves like memories from the past can float away in autumn to creat new leaves(memories) in the spring. Giving new life and hope and a future not yet told.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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thank you neil :-)
Comment from LoAnn Beery
A nostalgic look into the past to see and remember. Often, it is with great sadness, but
just the memory alone can remind you of sweet moments. If we did not love, we could not hurt.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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A nostalgic look into the past to see and remember. Often, it is with great sadness, but
just the memory alone can remind you of sweet moments. If we did not love, we could not hurt.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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yup so true... thank you loann :-)
Comment from estory
This has all the elements of traditional haiku. You have the perfect balance of the five seven five pattern, the nature image, and the epiphany moment. Here the scattering autumn leaves symbolize memories and our tenuous grasp on them. estory
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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This has all the elements of traditional haiku. You have the perfect balance of the five seven five pattern, the nature image, and the epiphany moment. Here the scattering autumn leaves symbolize memories and our tenuous grasp on them. estory
Comment Written 04-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2024
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hehe thank you estory :-)
