Strong in my Faith
How my Faith Guides my life4 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're very brave attempting a contest entry for you first milestone post. Thank you for sharing this Faith Flash contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
What is Faith, When you see the wind causing the leaves on the trees to move, you dont see the wind. yet you know the wind (when & don't & period after wind, wait why the double space before the next sentence???)
Especialy when how you are living your life displeases God. (Especially)
using the gifts the you are given is very (doesn't make sense, omit 'the')
you may feel that you dont have to face any (don't)
I believe that the would be a better. place. (they would)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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You're very brave attempting a contest entry for you first milestone post. Thank you for sharing this Faith Flash contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
What is Faith, When you see the wind causing the leaves on the trees to move, you dont see the wind. yet you know the wind (when & don't & period after wind, wait why the double space before the next sentence???)
Especialy when how you are living your life displeases God. (Especially)
using the gifts the you are given is very (doesn't make sense, omit 'the')
you may feel that you dont have to face any (don't)
I believe that the would be a better. place. (they would)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your input. I made some necessary changes.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Welcome to FanStory! Your poem is a lovely tribute to faith and a good entry for the Faith Flash contest. I enjoyed it very much. If I could make a suggestion it would be to remove the title and your name from the top of the poem. There is a seperate place to put the title when you fill in your contest entry. Having the title and your name at the top detracts from your lovely poem. Just a suggestion. Thank you for sharing your work and enjoy your time here.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Welcome to FanStory! Your poem is a lovely tribute to faith and a good entry for the Faith Flash contest. I enjoyed it very much. If I could make a suggestion it would be to remove the title and your name from the top of the poem. There is a seperate place to put the title when you fill in your contest entry. Having the title and your name at the top detracts from your lovely poem. Just a suggestion. Thank you for sharing your work and enjoy your time here.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your advice. I am new to this..
Comment from Douglas Goff
I agree with your last paragraph wholeheartedly!
This is a great description of faith. I really like the wind analogy
Good job! What a cool Faith Flash entry.
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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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I agree with your last paragraph wholeheartedly!
This is a great description of faith. I really like the wind analogy
Good job! What a cool Faith Flash entry.
D
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you so much for your comments. I had two small strokes and stopped writing years ago. I Praise God for helping do what I love to do.
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God is good. Always.
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AMEN
Comment from Glenda Collins
What a beautiful first post. Wonderful to use it to write about your faith. Welcome to FanStory. I am also a newbie. I think you will enjoy it and find it full of other very supportive believers and writers. You did a fine job expressing your faith and referring to scripture to do so. I agree prayer is key and it is important we share our faith.
Thanks for sharing yours with your first post. Great job!
Blessings,
Glenda
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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What a beautiful first post. Wonderful to use it to write about your faith. Welcome to FanStory. I am also a newbie. I think you will enjoy it and find it full of other very supportive believers and writers. You did a fine job expressing your faith and referring to scripture to do so. I agree prayer is key and it is important we share our faith.
Thanks for sharing yours with your first post. Great job!
Blessings,
Glenda
Comment Written 01-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. They are a blessing to me.
