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Start The Battle On Your Knees

2nd Place Finish

2 total reviews 
Comment from Baltimore Born
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. Your 1-6-1 syllable count meets the requirement for this contest. Each line connected well with the next. Nice picture.

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
    Thank you. It has a good message!
reply by Baltimore Born on 01-Mar-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from papa55mike
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Yes, we all must pray to keep from becoming prey. For that lion roams about seeking someone to devour. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2024


reply by the author on 01-Mar-2024
    Thanks, Mike. So happy to hear from you. It?s been awhile. Hope all is well in your corner of the blue marble.
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