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Boy with Toy

A boy plays with his toy.

2 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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You did a great job with this rhyming 1-6-1 poem. Your syllables were right, as were your rhymes. The poem was innocent and sweet. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank you! I hope I win!
Comment from Sally Law
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This is the hardest form of poetry, I think. It's no small task to craft a three line, eight syllable poetry with rhyming ends. Splendid offering and beautifully illustrated. Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest. Sally. :))

 Comment Written 29-Feb-2024


reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much!