2024 Japanese Poetry
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Makes one wonder if his wife does too. This is a naughty but innocent poem. The presentation is wonderful. I enjoyed reading and smiled. It caused me to remember a few of my Victoria's Secret negligees when my figure could still pull it off.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Makes one wonder if his wife does too. This is a naughty but innocent poem. The presentation is wonderful. I enjoyed reading and smiled. It caused me to remember a few of my Victoria's Secret negligees when my figure could still pull it off.
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. It's always a pleasure.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
ooh this was a cool gogyohka
there's so much unsaid between those 5 lines
great imagery and smooth flow
nice! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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ooh this was a cool gogyohka
there's so much unsaid between those 5 lines
great imagery and smooth flow
nice! thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
I remember when Victoria Secret first started showing up at Malls. My mother went in and after perusing the skimpy items she walked out saying, "Well, f she just wearing that, it won't be secret much longer." I've never been able to forget that. Lol. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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I remember when Victoria Secret first started showing up at Malls. My mother went in and after perusing the skimpy items she walked out saying, "Well, f she just wearing that, it won't be secret much longer." I've never been able to forget that. Lol. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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LoL. Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
Ouch, dating can be hard, I wonder if the truth was known, or the woman was happy having an affair, no matter, the pain of rejection still hurts, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Ouch, dating can be hard, I wonder if the truth was known, or the woman was happy having an affair, no matter, the pain of rejection still hurts, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I wonder if indeed she is wearing this negligee or not. Although I gave different ones to my wife, and of course my wife, I wonder if they've swapped the, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Oh yes, I wonder if indeed she is wearing this negligee or not. Although I gave different ones to my wife, and of course my wife, I wonder if they've swapped the, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
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Bless you
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! Since the negligee is gathering dust, I guess the marriage is working out okay and the narrator should set her hopes on a man who isn't married.
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Oh dear! Since the negligee is gathering dust, I guess the marriage is working out okay and the narrator should set her hopes on a man who isn't married.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024
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Yes, loving a married man is the worse idea for so many reasons. For sure, both woman get hurt and the guy is a loser. And waste of time.
Thank you, big sister.
Love
Marival
