Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

Excellent contrasts with so much expressed in so few words.

Several items for your consideration:
headed in there direction. (their)
to much death (too)

Thanks for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Feb-2024

thank you, the corrections have been made

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is a powerful and thoughtful poem. The third stanza stood out especially for me. I like the way you show a contrast between the safety and comfort of your home and the violence and chaos "over there." Very creative.

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024

Thank you sir. I'm trying to get it off my chest and in their faces.