Tear Drop
His inspiration came in a tear drop.3 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well written story. Each required word is in this story. The story reads well and had drama within it. Good complimentary picture that accentuated the story well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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This is a well written story. Each required word is in this story. The story reads well and had drama within it. Good complimentary picture that accentuated the story well. Nice job.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2024
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Thank you for the read and the review. Appreciated.
Comment from jessizero
I looked and looked, but I couldn't find the required words in your story. Maybe if you put them in bold, it would be easier? Or did you leave them out accidentally? Your story was good, though. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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I looked and looked, but I couldn't find the required words in your story. Maybe if you put them in bold, it would be easier? Or did you leave them out accidentally? Your story was good, though. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Wow, did I goof again? Thanks, I will check.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Well wouldn't that be nice! I love how the tear was what got him rolling again. Very creative and also visual. I could see that in my head. I thought this was a terrific story especially considering you only had 100 words to write it.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Well wouldn't that be nice! I love how the tear was what got him rolling again. Very creative and also visual. I could see that in my head. I thought this was a terrific story especially considering you only had 100 words to write it.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2024
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
