Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.

Times been sold then brought . Pretty sure you mean (Time's for Time has & move the period closer to 'bought.')

No longer the younger man but remains with "Newer of Thought." . (not sure why this random period is after the quotation marks)

God,so much. (space after the comma)

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thank you Barbara for the corrections and I'm still working very hard at both my writings and my relationship.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem does such a wonderful job of sharing your love of God and your faith. I thought each stanza was powerful and I greatly enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thanks Michael I've been trying very hard to do that.
Doctor Ricky

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

You are doing some good deep soul-searching in this piece. I am curious as to why you did not put it under a poem format box, instead of the prose box. It would just format better that way.

Some typo possibilities:

Times been sold then brought (bought?)

Earth's horrid of *Vault. (Would read better without "of")

Thank you for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 22-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thanks Julie for your kind thoughts and suggestions.
What you got to realize about me is I was never interested in grammar as a child nor reading or writing and that everything I do now is a gift.
Doctor Ricky