Your Lips Are Cold
A couple argue about an unwanted pregnancy.2 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is excellent writing for the challenge with good imagery and authentic dialogue. I think spacing the dialigue or using different colors would help readers see it more clearly.
Best wishes,
Alex
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This is excellent writing for the challenge with good imagery and authentic dialogue. I think spacing the dialigue or using different colors would help readers see it more clearly.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is great. An excellent job of showing us what is happening through the dialogue as required in the contest. I thought this was an interesting conversation and was shocked that it was a true story. Great job.
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This is great. An excellent job of showing us what is happening through the dialogue as required in the contest. I thought this was an interesting conversation and was shocked that it was a true story. Great job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
