Lovely Linda by the Sea
Unrequited love story10 total reviews
Comment from teafor2
RODG: A true septet containing all requirements of writing prompt...The
soliloquy-like succinct out spilling of emotions; alliterations and rhyming provides a melodious rendering ear pleasing post...The 'dated' picture is
complimentary and supplementary to scribes wonder write. teafor2
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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RODG: A true septet containing all requirements of writing prompt...The
soliloquy-like succinct out spilling of emotions; alliterations and rhyming provides a melodious rendering ear pleasing post...The 'dated' picture is
complimentary and supplementary to scribes wonder write. teafor2
Comment Written 21-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, teafor2, for all the kudos for LOVELY LINDA.
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You are welcome. teafor2
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice poem following all the requirements for the format for the contest. The theme of unrequited love is a poignant one. Sending you good wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Very nice poem following all the requirements for the format for the contest. The theme of unrequited love is a poignant one. Sending you good wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Wendy, for sharing my poem.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Lovely poem about a lady who was kind of into herself. Seas shells by the sea and they are lovely as can be. But those shells will not be as important as you and me because they cannot see.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Lovely poem about a lady who was kind of into herself. Seas shells by the sea and they are lovely as can be. But those shells will not be as important as you and me because they cannot see.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I truly appreciate your sharing my poem, Rosemary, and your rhymed review.
Comment from Jeano
I didn't enter this competition because I just couldn't come up with anything clever. After reading all of the entries, I think you came the closest. Not exactly sure how anyone can compete with Peter Piper, Humpty Dumpty or Peter-Peter Pumpkin eater. LOL Good luck in the competition. I think reading them was as hard as writing them.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I didn't enter this competition because I just couldn't come up with anything clever. After reading all of the entries, I think you came the closest. Not exactly sure how anyone can compete with Peter Piper, Humpty Dumpty or Peter-Peter Pumpkin eater. LOL Good luck in the competition. I think reading them was as hard as writing them.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I am flattered you like my entry so much, Jeano. Many thanks for sharing.
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You're welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
A Linda poem with all the correct syllables, correct lines, and alliteration in every line, author. :) You did good. It must be a memory of the youth in you. :) This is a good entry for the Rhyming Alliteration Contest. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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A Linda poem with all the correct syllables, correct lines, and alliteration in every line, author. :) You did good. It must be a memory of the youth in you. :) This is a good entry for the Rhyming Alliteration Contest. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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I think every guy had at least one girl he pined for. Many thanks, Poetwatch, for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Julie Helms
Nice alliterative, rhyming poem. It has a lovely lilt to it, which is very pleasing, and matches nicely with your chosen artwork. Syllables and line count are in order. Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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Nice alliterative, rhyming poem. It has a lovely lilt to it, which is very pleasing, and matches nicely with your chosen artwork. Syllables and line count are in order. Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2024
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I am very pleased you enjoyed my poem, Julie. Thank you for the nice review.
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. The required rhyming scheme for this contest is met. The syllable count in each line is good. Your picture accentuates the poem. Nice job.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This is a well-crafted poem. The poem reads and flows well. The required rhyming scheme for this contest is met. The syllable count in each line is good. Your picture accentuates the poem. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for sharing and praising my poem, BB.
Comment from kahpot
You have composed an excellent poem of love, though unrequited it describes one's feelings beautifully, very well written in this format, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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You have composed an excellent poem of love, though unrequited it describes one's feelings beautifully, very well written in this format, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, kahpot, for those great kudos.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge. You use good alliteration, imagery and descriptions. The image matches well with your words.
Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge. You use good alliteration, imagery and descriptions. The image matches well with your words.
Thank you for sharing this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I truly appreciate the kudos, Alex. Thank you.
Comment from jessizero
You seem to have fulfilled all the requirements of this rhyming alliteration contest. (Yes, I counted your syllables.) The poem was sweet and lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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You seem to have fulfilled all the requirements of this rhyming alliteration contest. (Yes, I counted your syllables.) The poem was sweet and lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2024
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I appreciate you kind praise of my poem, jessizero. Thank you.
