Highway Hunter
A dalliance in the shadows7 total reviews
Comment from Baltimore Born
This is a well-crafted poem. You told the story in this poem well. Good details throughout the poem. The message is clear. The ending is definitely horrific. Nice job.
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This is a well-crafted poem. You told the story in this poem well. Good details throughout the poem. The message is clear. The ending is definitely horrific. Nice job.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Samantha, I have always liked that name, but I sure do not enjoy reading about what she experienced. I am glad some of these stories are fiction because, in a nonfiction experience, they do sometimes happen.
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Samantha, I have always liked that name, but I sure do not enjoy reading about what she experienced. I am glad some of these stories are fiction because, in a nonfiction experience, they do sometimes happen.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this poetry contest, you've fulfilled all the requirements of the completion plus you've written an excellent rhyming poem, it flows well, is articulate, and a good chance, blessings Roy
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This is an excellent entry in this poetry contest, you've fulfilled all the requirements of the completion plus you've written an excellent rhyming poem, it flows well, is articulate, and a good chance, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
There's just a certain something about reading about a serial killer in a poem! Well done horror entry, flows well, tells a complete story.
I did not quite understand what this one line meant
"The waitress missed the girl behind her"
Thanks for the creepy poem! Julie
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There's just a certain something about reading about a serial killer in a poem! Well done horror entry, flows well, tells a complete story.
I did not quite understand what this one line meant
"The waitress missed the girl behind her"
Thanks for the creepy poem! Julie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a chilling story of murder and the horror of this story is that it is often true. A well worded poem for the contest, good rhymes with bloody sentiments, love Dolly x
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This is a chilling story of murder and the horror of this story is that it is often true. A well worded poem for the contest, good rhymes with bloody sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That is an exceptional horror story poem and I hate any horror stories. Exceptional descriptions and imagery. Chatactee description seemed real. Well written.
Best wishes,
Alex
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That is an exceptional horror story poem and I hate any horror stories. Exceptional descriptions and imagery. Chatactee description seemed real. Well written.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a look inside a sick mind. I think you did an excellent job of showing us him through his viewpoint in your poem. Very creative with a natural rhyme scheme. Great storytelling.
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This is a look inside a sick mind. I think you did an excellent job of showing us him through his viewpoint in your poem. Very creative with a natural rhyme scheme. Great storytelling.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
