Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Things don't seem to go right do they?

Yes,that's for the floating pp. (space needed after the comma & no clue what 'pp' is)

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024

Thank you Barbara I hadn't written that one without really spending my time to think about it like I do a lot of my work since I am considered a Slam Poet of Laureate.
Doctor Ricky 1025

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

My goodness ,Doc. Hope she gets out soon. I do ask you this. What woman doesn't make the man that loves her cry night and day?

Love is no swan boat ride around Coney Island. It's more like the Demon Drop at Cedar Point. Twists and turns ups and downs and you're lucky if you don't vomit.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2024

Thanks Douglas.
Update: This person she supposedly had all these children with
named "Miller"
Was just one of three men to result in her children.
(Supposedly 12)
Her sister Tara is also teaching me about the cruelty of her much older sister Dawna.
And yes I have been conceived and played.
That still doesn't mean as her husband I will abandon her in her time of mental needs.
It gives me more information to get the help I need for her and us.
Doctor Ricky