Stray Goat On A Risky Hill
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Stray Goat On A Risky Hill -2"part One
8 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
There are parallel worlds right alongside ours. I believe sometimes they touchl I had a spot in my house where stuff would disappear from. The stuff would be returned but different.My husband could not find his cel phone for love nor money. It was blue when he lost it, it came back black. He liked it better.
Life is full of wonder.Good writing Karen
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
  |
There are parallel worlds right alongside ours. I believe sometimes they touchl I had a spot in my house where stuff would disappear from. The stuff would be returned but different.My husband could not find his cel phone for love nor money. It was blue when he lost it, it came back black. He liked it better.
Life is full of wonder.Good writing Karen
Comment Written 04-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2024
-
Please forgive the delay. I fell so far behind. Thanks for your response! Just give me a yell if you feel I have ignored you. I would never do that!
-
I get bogged down too!
-
You are bogged down in Talent, I know! (or bogged up?)
-
How about full up with talent?
-
Yes, that sounds better!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Great choice of settings. This is clever: ""I know, but if my footprints step anywhere near his prints, I may get a message." this is so good you are such a good writer.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
Great choice of settings. This is clever: ""I know, but if my footprints step anywhere near his prints, I may get a message." this is so good you are such a good writer.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
Sorry! I appreciate you so much! I lost my reply but wanted to send thanks anyway!
-
Been there done that You're very welcome
-
If you ever think I'm avoiding your replies, let me know. I have had some problems on this site.
-
***Understood***
-
Keep writing!
-
Keep on keeping on
-
Keep on keeping on keeping on!
Comment from Daylily
I am not disappointed at all. It continues containing the initial element of mystery and excitement. I like the way the story is unfolding and that it has animals (I like all of them, too.) :-)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
I am not disappointed at all. It continues containing the initial element of mystery and excitement. I like the way the story is unfolding and that it has animals (I like all of them, too.) :-)
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
Many thanks. I am grateful for your words and review.
Comment from Sanku
I didnt come to the site for quite a few days .So I read the first and the second chapter at a stretch. I am quite intrigued. cowboy seems to be an interesting characte.
chapter two was posted twice?
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
I didnt come to the site for quite a few days .So I read the first and the second chapter at a stretch. I am quite intrigued. cowboy seems to be an interesting characte.
chapter two was posted twice?
Comment Written 16-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
There was so much trouble with this! I posted two, but it posted one instead. I couldn't take it off. Finally, I got it to print Part 2 but the description says it's part 1.
Comment from karenina
So this chapter is posted twice. I bet Tom can consolidate your reviews and you can eliminate or disable the duplicate.
This is very intriguing! We have "visions" --- but are they of the far distant past? More current? Tied to something yet to happen?
This is a great "hook" for a mystery!
I'm all in!
Keep it up!
(I'm not sure which chapter two you are keeping so I reviewed in both places)
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
|
So this chapter is posted twice. I bet Tom can consolidate your reviews and you can eliminate or disable the duplicate.
This is very intriguing! We have "visions" --- but are they of the far distant past? More current? Tied to something yet to happen?
This is a great "hook" for a mystery!
I'm all in!
Keep it up!
(I'm not sure which chapter two you are keeping so I reviewed in both places)
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2024
-
There was so much trouble with this! I posted two, but it posted one instead. I couldn't take it off. Finally, I got it to print Part 2 but the description says it's part 1.
-
Oh well. Technology... it's a blessing and a curse!
-
If I hear from you twice, it's a blessing!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Not sure why this is posted twice. Probably and error.
Bradbury pondered a moment and said, "I believe I (you can put a period after 'moment' and omit 'and said' for a tighter read)
"Gentlemen" he said, (comma after, 'Gentlemen,")
Bradbury, "therefore, the possibility of goats (Therefore)
|
Not sure why this is posted twice. Probably and error.
Bradbury pondered a moment and said, "I believe I (you can put a period after 'moment' and omit 'and said' for a tighter read)
"Gentlemen" he said, (comma after, 'Gentlemen,")
Bradbury, "therefore, the possibility of goats (Therefore)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
Comment from BethShelby
I'm enjoying you story. I always like a good mystery. Those clues sound like the might mean something easier to tract down than a blury goat. I'll be looking forward to more.
|
I'm enjoying you story. I always like a good mystery. Those clues sound like the might mean something easier to tract down than a blury goat. I'll be looking forward to more.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Jim. You did a good job with this chapter as you continue to build the premise for this adventure. The inclusion of the librarian is a good piece to add and sort of a foundational fount of wisdom you can keep going back to as you craft your story. You are using fantasy and realism together. :) I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
|
Hello Jim. You did a good job with this chapter as you continue to build the premise for this adventure. The inclusion of the librarian is a good piece to add and sort of a foundational fount of wisdom you can keep going back to as you craft your story. You are using fantasy and realism together. :) I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
