Canyon River Nonet
A nonet starting with 9 syllable line21 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Your nonet describes the scene in enough detail that there is no reliance on the accompanying picture. It is strong enough to stand alone.
One of the things I like about nonets is the way they drill down to the final word. You have chosen a surprising and impactful end to sharpen the meaning of your poem and make it more than just a description of a bucolic scene. Very well done. I imagine this might catch the eye of the judges.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Your nonet describes the scene in enough detail that there is no reliance on the accompanying picture. It is strong enough to stand alone.
One of the things I like about nonets is the way they drill down to the final word. You have chosen a surprising and impactful end to sharpen the meaning of your poem and make it more than just a description of a bucolic scene. Very well done. I imagine this might catch the eye of the judges.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
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Comment Written 12-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2024
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Thank you for such a nice review. That just made my night.