Climax-The summit.
As we reach the summit, our bodies take flight.2 total reviews
Comment from XinaD
Very well done. The cadence had an ebb and flow to it that built up the intensity, much like your topic. It fit well. The art you chose also added to that intensity, complimenting it perfectly.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Very well done. The cadence had an ebb and flow to it that built up the intensity, much like your topic. It fit well. The art you chose also added to that intensity, complimenting it perfectly.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Julie Helms
Wonderfully worded poem intermingling the peak of sexual desire with the internal bonding of souls together! You use lots of good metaphors and repeated phrases effectively.
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Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Wonderfully worded poem intermingling the peak of sexual desire with the internal bonding of souls together! You use lots of good metaphors and repeated phrases effectively.
If you are interested in getting rid of the highlight around your letters, first copy your poem onto Notepad from whatever word processor you are using, then copy and paste from notepad into the entry box. Notepad removes all the formatting that shows up as highlighting here.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 11-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2024
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Thank you. I will do that. I appreciate
