Waiting for Spring
tetractys contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello Dove. You did a wonderful job crafting this anticipatory Tetractys. I too am looking forward to spring and I've already picked two daffodils that I have in a vase :). The warmer days are on the way!!
Thanks for sharing.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hello Dove. You did a wonderful job crafting this anticipatory Tetractys. I too am looking forward to spring and I've already picked two daffodils that I have in a vase :). The warmer days are on the way!!
Thanks for sharing.
Melissa
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Hi Melissa, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Teri7
Donna, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about being hopeful for spring to be soon. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Donna, This is a very beautiful and very well written poem you have penned about being hopeful for spring to be soon. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2024
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Dear Teri, thank you for your comments and review. Love and blessings to you too! Donna
Comment from patcelaw
This is a good poem that you have written, and I enjoyed it very much. I am sure after a hard winter. That's why most of us are feeling as well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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This is a good poem that you have written, and I enjoyed it very much. I am sure after a hard winter. That's why most of us are feeling as well. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia .
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Hi Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Could you tell me what needs improvement? Dove
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Nothing needs improvement other than my eyesight. I apparently gave you a one and that was not intended at all, so I went back and changed it so it now reflexes being a five because it is a very well written poem.
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Thank you. Dove
Comment from Sally Law
Everyone I know is anxiously awaiting spring. Beautifully written and illustrated poem of our collective hope, Dove Marie. Sending you my best today as always, and hope for the coming spring. Sally. XOs
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Everyone I know is anxiously awaiting spring. Beautifully written and illustrated poem of our collective hope, Dove Marie. Sending you my best today as always, and hope for the coming spring. Sally. XOs
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Sally, thank you for your comments and review. I send you my best too. Dove xoxo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a sweet and gentle verse reflecting the visual and expressing a longing for Spring to emerge from beneath its harsh winter covering. Thank you for sharing and good luck (strange they don't endorse the contest entry below your post). Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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This is such a sweet and gentle verse reflecting the visual and expressing a longing for Spring to emerge from beneath its harsh winter covering. Thank you for sharing and good luck (strange they don't endorse the contest entry below your post). Debbie
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2024
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Hi Debbie,Thank you for your comments and review. My poem was in preview mode and I didn't release it until today, too late for the contest. Dove
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I've been there and kicked up a right old fuss because I'd paid my entry fee and released it but, somehow, it didn't register. But they ended up allowing it.
