Worms Can Be Brave
sometimes5 total reviews
Comment from Jeano
And so it goes in the vegetable garden. Your POV brings an entirely different perspective, but having gardens of my own, I'm on the side of the birds. LOL
Well done, very cute story.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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And so it goes in the vegetable garden. Your POV brings an entirely different perspective, but having gardens of my own, I'm on the side of the birds. LOL
Well done, very cute story.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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I am, too. Was just being silly.
thanks!
Comment from Begin Again
How sad! A love story with a dramatic ending. Absolutely adorable choices of words and images. Very well done. I enjoyed your flash entry.
Smiles and best wishes
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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How sad! A love story with a dramatic ending. Absolutely adorable choices of words and images. Very well done. I enjoyed your flash entry.
Smiles and best wishes
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2024
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Well, thank you so much. I've been informed I didn't have enough words. my word count said 100. ah well.
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Quick,,,I am sure you cab slip another word in.
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I did. will see if they accept it.
Thanks!!!
Comment from Julie Helms
Anthropomorphic vegetables lend quite a bit of humor! I'm a little horrified that Tess is missing her entire backside. I mean, I don't know how you come back from that. I did not see the ending coming. Normally those worms are horrible for the garden, and you made him the hero and martyr! Really funny start to finish. I enjoyed it! Julie
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Anthropomorphic vegetables lend quite a bit of humor! I'm a little horrified that Tess is missing her entire backside. I mean, I don't know how you come back from that. I did not see the ending coming. Normally those worms are horrible for the garden, and you made him the hero and martyr! Really funny start to finish. I enjoyed it! Julie
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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thanks, Julie. I had a beautiful tomato on my tomato plant and a bird had eaten the whole back half - a weird thing to inspire a story. :) actually, it''s a weird story. And I don't like worms. But thanks for reading and I'm glad it struck your funny bone.
Comment from lancellot
Well, that's a true friend who would give his life for no good reason. A very unique fantasy tale. I sure this one will stand out for the readers. It feels more like a nice children's tale, except for the ending. I would reconsider that.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Well, that's a true friend who would give his life for no good reason. A very unique fantasy tale. I sure this one will stand out for the readers. It feels more like a nice children's tale, except for the ending. I would reconsider that.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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well, I would probably have to rewrite the whole thing. As I said, bittersweet. But thanks for reading and the suggestion.
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Oh, you don't have to. I only meant if you wanted it as Children's fiction, rather than General.
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Think I'll just leave it at weird. It is.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yep he did. Sometimes we can be exposed to discomfort or, in this case, a bird eating us, but we still should do the right thing.
That's how I was raised. Excellent, exciting, emotional story that I enjoyed. I didn't plan on the alliteration. ;) lol
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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Yep he did. Sometimes we can be exposed to discomfort or, in this case, a bird eating us, but we still should do the right thing.
That's how I was raised. Excellent, exciting, emotional story that I enjoyed. I didn't plan on the alliteration. ;) lol
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 07-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2024
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thanks, Alex, I appreciate that. Have been told I should have a happy ending.
