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A 1-6-1 Poem25 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Well done, but totally depressing. I may not be on much for a while. I am moving on May 18th. I am moving from Houston to Outside Dallas in Plano,Texas. I have my three sisters out there. I am happy but busy. Karen
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Well done, but totally depressing. I may not be on much for a while. I am moving on May 18th. I am moving from Houston to Outside Dallas in Plano,Texas. I have my three sisters out there. I am happy but busy. Karen
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Karen, travel safe, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Comment from BermyBye50
kahpot,
Congrats on your win in the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your three line poem captures the all too common life experience on millions of suffering children around the world. I wish I had 6 stars to give. This 1-6-1 poem however is deserving of 10 stars+
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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kahpot,
Congrats on your win in the 1-6-1 poem contest. Your three line poem captures the all too common life experience on millions of suffering children around the world. I wish I had 6 stars to give. This 1-6-1 poem however is deserving of 10 stars+
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much, Eugene, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
You deserved this contest win with this thoughtful poem. Your selected artist is someone I too have used for my posts. The photograph is truly haunting.
In a few words, you really captured an important thought in your presentation.
Congrats.
Mark
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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You deserved this contest win with this thoughtful poem. Your selected artist is someone I too have used for my posts. The photograph is truly haunting.
In a few words, you really captured an important thought in your presentation.
Congrats.
Mark
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark, for your exceptional comments and six stars, yes, this artist is very good, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This 1-6-1 rhyming poem is clever and opened a can of worm about your childhood that I want to know. Please write more about your sad childhood.
Excellent and congratulations.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This 1-6-1 rhyming poem is clever and opened a can of worm about your childhood that I want to know. Please write more about your sad childhood.
Excellent and congratulations.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Wow! thank you so very much for your exceptional review and six stars, some worms like the dark, but I will try, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from GoWiSt
Ha! I knew this would win. :-)
Striking portrait of the child's countenance in that artwork.
Successfully met the line and syllable criteria of the contest.
It conjures up sad images of innocent children caught up in war-ravished conditions around the world.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Ha! I knew this would win. :-)
Striking portrait of the child's countenance in that artwork.
Successfully met the line and syllable criteria of the contest.
It conjures up sad images of innocent children caught up in war-ravished conditions around the world.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, a lot of people do feel for all children, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Congrats on winning the contest. Your words have meaning and give much for the reader to think about. I admire your use of the rhyming words my, cry and why. You did well with the 1-6-1 form.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Congrats on winning the contest. Your words have meaning and give much for the reader to think about. I admire your use of the rhyming words my, cry and why. You did well with the 1-6-1 form.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from karenina
Congratulations on your contest win. The photo caught me up short and your words sealed the deal. Why do our innocent children have to suffer the injustices of war, hunger, homelessness, abuse, neglect...
Well deserving of first place!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Congratulations on your contest win. The photo caught me up short and your words sealed the deal. Why do our innocent children have to suffer the injustices of war, hunger, homelessness, abuse, neglect...
Well deserving of first place!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Karenina, yes, our children all over the world seem to be suffering, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Such a powerful poem in so few words!
Great job!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Kahpot, you've penned another goodie. This type of poetry is not easy but you executed it well. Of note:
why
(Only one's heart knows the reason)
Thought provoking. Good rhyming. Well done. Margaret
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Hi Kahpot, you've penned another goodie. This type of poetry is not easy but you executed it well. Of note:
why
(Only one's heart knows the reason)
Thought provoking. Good rhyming. Well done. Margaret
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Magaret, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from gramalot8
This is a very challenging style of poetry to write. You have accomplished this very hard. It's difficult to have it make sense a d rhyme within the requirements of the style.
I bet most of us can look back at our youth and wonder why this or that did or did not happen.
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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This is a very challenging style of poetry to write. You have accomplished this very hard. It's difficult to have it make sense a d rhyme within the requirements of the style.
I bet most of us can look back at our youth and wonder why this or that did or did not happen.
Thank you for sharing this with us and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from QC Poet
Reading this 1-6-1 poem posting brought tears to my Soul especially when looking at the accompanying photo So many Children are suffering across the world due to man's hunger for power an Old Marvin Gaye Song constantly plays in my head it's titled What's Going On Bless You for bringing the Plight of Children domestic violence and abuse of every kind in this Reminder Bless You
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Reading this 1-6-1 poem posting brought tears to my Soul especially when looking at the accompanying photo So many Children are suffering across the world due to man's hunger for power an Old Marvin Gaye Song constantly plays in my head it's titled What's Going On Bless You for bringing the Plight of Children domestic violence and abuse of every kind in this Reminder Bless You
Comment Written 06-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2024
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Thank you so very much for your understanding comments, yes, we need to do more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
